[Official] Cardenas4o9 Thread

[cardenas4o9]

Alright this is my thread and its gonna move slow cuz i dont have a mic. I record on my homeboys mic and he lives in Houston, so i can only record when he comes down to visit. I recorded a low quality verse on my laptop just to give yall an idea of how i do it. Can somebody tell me how to upload it to usershare or something so i can do that please

[cardenas4o9]

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Haha nevermind i figured it out

listen to it and please give me some feedback. remember its low quality because i recorded it on my laptop and this is just to give yall an idea of what i have. high quality full version should come later

http://usershare.net/vzvmt3uw96pb

[Safe_Kid]

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Ok from what i heard so far, your flow didn't sound so good, yet it sounded pretty good. It some how went nicely.

If you want to be an artist in this section i suggest you register in the rap index.

[cardenas4o9]

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Alright thanks for the feedback. Can you go ahead and put me in there or tell me what i need to do to get in there

[cardenas4o9]

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lol ok so how were the lyrics? and how about some real feedback without being a real ass about it

[cardenas4o9]

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alright cool i can respect your opinion. thanks for listening though and not being too harsh lol

[cardenas4o9]

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alright cool i can respect your opinion. thanks for listening though and not being too harsh lol

[cardenas4o9]

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Im So Disrespectful Bitch!!!

Can you stop spamming my thread

[cardenas4o9]

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lol keep doing it so my thread can stay at the top

[cardenas4o9]

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Heres the higher quality version of the track that i posted before. Im about to post a new one too

lax files.mp3 - 1.7 Mb

Please give some feedback and ill be sure to return the favor

[zachsjlives]

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i liked it alot.. the pace and delivery were on point pretty much the whole way through but some of the lyrics were hard to hear/understand. The quality is pretty good too so keep recording how your doing it!

[cardenas4o9]

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i liked it alot.. the pace and delivery were on point pretty much the whole way through but some of the lyrics were hard to hear/understand. The quality is pretty good too so keep recording how your doing it!

Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback Ill go ahead and post the lyrics:

Fuckin with them niggas from tha southside section
you gon get ya insides turned outside, mention
anything to a nigga bout a southside texan
you gon end up with ya motherfuckin mouth wide
wreckin anybody from tha outside
checkin anybody pullin out my
techs (text) anybody wanna reply
let a nigga know n watch how many people die whenever we ride
fuckin with them niggas aint a good thing mayne
you gon end up lookin like a motherfuckin mood ring
face turn yellow when the tool bang
paint ya shirt red with tha blue flame
lay ya ass down blood leakin from ya head to ya shoe strings
leave ya ass popped like a motherfuckin blue vein
niggas turn green when they see tha mess you made
leave ya draws brown from tha motherfuckin poop stains
shit so nasty niggas get queezy
never get stuck man shit so easy
fuckin with my flow is like fuckin with three of me
flow is on creotine niggas aint seein me
blind to the fact that i just started doin this
im already tired god dammit im through with this
Port Arthur, Texas motherfucker get used to this..