A Year (Part 1)

[broc717]

Off of my upcoming mixtape, C'est La Vie. The idea is a trilogy explaining EVERYTHING I've been thru in the past year. This song describes 2013 January until this past summer. Part 2 will be from September until now. Part 3, is about where im currently at and where I plan on being. Enjoy.

feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...kwan-poyo.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...re-i-like.html

[tmillzy]

Lets get that collab poppin

[TupacShaquer]

Goddamn one of the best songs I've ever heard in the stu
Lemme get a download link please

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Off of my upcoming mixtape, C'est La Vie. The idea is a trilogy explaining EVERYTHING I've been thru in the past year. This song describes 2013 January until this past summer. Part 2 will be from September until now. Part 3, is about where im currently at and where I plan on being. Enjoy.

feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...kwan-poyo.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...re-i-like.html

you definitely didnt leave feed on Million this dope tho man good story telling

[Milli Tune]

So:
+Lyrics and idea!!
+Beat rly deep to this lyrics
+Good work
+/-Quality
+/-You have emotional moments, but try to put more
+/-Your voice is a lil bit boring imo

So if this track have to be underground track it's rly nice ale your voice can be like that, try just put more emotions and do in better quality and will be 5/5 now I give u 4/5. But if u wanna do mainstream tracks you have to work on your voise and other tricks to do it more interesting. As minestream track I give 3.2/5


Milli

[mykill]

you definitely didnt leave feed on Million this dope tho man good story telling

Where's that 2nd feedback though?!

[broc717]

i def left two, lemme check lol almost positive I did, if i didnt I'll leave feed on something else right now

[mykill]

i def left two, lemme check lol almost positive I did, if i didnt I'll leave feed on something else right now

you browser might have messed up when you did it. nothing's there.

[TupacShaquer]

When you drop something as hot as this you don't need to leave feedback

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

When you drop something as hot as this you don't need to leave feedback

Lmao eating a nigga dick n shit

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the is mad ill tho lol, is everything you said true ?

[ATLien666]

Flexed your ass off on this song. You really turned down that record deal? This shit was insanely lyrical and you have a certain aspect that makes your songs interesting and entertaining without them having a mainstream feel. You painted a really good image without going off on a tangent. The only negative thing I can kinda think of is that you lack a mainstream appeal. I couldn't really see you being as flexible as someone like Kendrick, honestly. I don't even know if you would want to veer that down path, so it's not a true negative. Really excited to hear the mixtape.

[Zimmie]

my favourite type of rap deep reflective bars over a soulful beat great track homie keep doing your thing