Rembrandt - (Seeking A Friend For) The End of The World

[ATLien666]

A different lil' love song, I suppose. Song is unfinished. I tried to mess around with time stretching, but it all sounded a lil' awkward. Mixtape is almost done. I got a little something for all the instrumentals, so I won't be adding anymore, now it's just a matter of finding the time to finish it all. I might release this and the song ft. kami de chukwu as my final singles before the tape.

End of The World snippet - MP3 Download, Play, Listen Songs - 4shared

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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

not bad.
what kinda molly do you use?

[ATLien666]

not bad.
what kinda molly do you use?

Lmao, I don't touch it.

[Milli Tune]

So:
+Good idea for track
+Good Lyrics
+You're doing your own world on this track
+good voice
+/-Quality
+/-flow
-I dont know why but beat sound like it jams or upset
-too many inaccuracies

You got almost all tools to be good rapper, but I dont feel THAT song. Too less harmony on it because it sounds jammed. Your voisce is your strongest point so try find yourself in anyother song . But dont lose your abillity to doing your own world on track cuz you do it well! Track 3/5 but u can be better I know that!

Milli

[wayniac number1]

well, this was refreshing
digging your beat selection, was chilled and original on top of that
just like your idea for the track, not that trap sound everybody doing around here (including me lol)
that slowed down part fitted good as well
and your voice got deeper or something? lol cause i remember i didnt like your voice too much
around 1:10 it got corny though when your voice got kinda "whiny"


but all in all i enjoyed the listen

[Tha Professor]

beat is trippy, caught me by surprise first, the bass tone sounds hella loud tho, kinda overpowers your voice. I see the energy. I like the screw effect as well. not bad son

[mykill]

Hmm...

That was some trippy shit... I'm not 100% sold on it, but I can understand the artistry you're going for. Would like to hear the whole thing to really digest it.

Mykill's Verdict: Eh... I dunno...

[MC_Crary]

Still haven't seen this movie. Need to though. Is that sample at the beginning from Requiem for a Dream? This is that signature Remy music. Some of the pitched parts sound a tad off beat. Does your pitch shifter change your vocal tempo? Mine does, may be something to watch out for. I would give a more in depth review on a final version, hate snippets lol. Diezal ass nigga jk lol.

[ATLien666]

yeah, bruh, you should check the movie out. it's surprisingly good. yeah, I think it is. I appreciate the feedback everyone. I wanted to try something new and experimental, I suppose. I hope to get a little better at it so I can write some abstract shit.