Do My Thang ft. Beezy

[yungfamou5]

This aint finished, just a ruff draft, still got mixing to do but I just wanted to post something for yall to hear to get an idea of wat my album will sound like

Do My Thang ft. Beezy by FamousBueller - HulkShare

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...llurz-mix.html

[mykill]

listened to this yesterday. Nice consistent track for you. The "purchase your track today" tag was a bit annoying. First guy wasnt that bad at all, and the two you meshed decently on the track. Nice job.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.8/5

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

tags throughout the whole track in 2014 though?

[DeezyMac]

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This sounds like you only applied a single autotune setting to the whole section, instead of altering it for every word/every word that was off note so that it sounded more smoove. I used to make the same mistake. The "I do my" part is fine, but "thang" and every word that rhymes with it is so off it's almost painful to hear. With autotune it's better if you set your recording program to make it so that you can hear yourself through your headphones as you're recording, it makes it much more easy to hit the right note since you're hearing it live.

I like the beat forreal tho. Catchy chorus. Second verse tho was a thumb down. Should have saved that as a short lil outro and just rapped normal.

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[ATLien666]

This is pretty dope. that tag is ruining it, though. I kinda like the off autotune, idk why. your quality has gotten a lot better, too. lyrics weren't anything special, but you have great charisma on the mic and when you spit verses, it's makes for an entertaining song. I think that's a great skill to have. I'm anxious to hear the tape because I definitely like this.

[yungfamou5]

appreciate all the feedback, before my album drop the Tags will be takin out and I will try to fix the autotune as well