Rembrandt - OG Bobby Johnson freestyle

[ATLien666]

Was tempted to go longer, but this ain't no ceilings, lol. Think I dropped some quality bars in here.

feedback:
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[KidComet]

Flow sounded kinda off in the begining but began to pick up , and then fell off again near the end,

[Flame Beats]

yeah flow is goes back and forth between good and bad.

3/5

[mykill]

Seems kinda disorganized. It's a freestyle, yeah, but still feels kind of all over the place. Flow was good at points, flow slipped during others. There was a stretch where you got kind of monotone, with less emotion, but you kinda picked that up slightly. Ending was kind of abrupt. Yeah, you should have added some more to this, but I also think some better direction with the freestyle would have assisted taking this over the top and making it sound more complete.

Hmm... I feel like putting some bars over this instrumental for some reason...

Mykill's Verdict: 3.1/5

[ATLien666]

'Preciate the feedback everyone. Yeah, my flow wasn't the best on this after repeat listening. The end part was very abrupt, I randomly decided to say that and it probably would've been better to just cut it or write more so I could flow into it better.

[TyIquan]

Yeah, you might have done better to perfect ya flow first. No disrespect, but it's really jarring and makes it hard to listen to. The lyrics sounded straight tho.

[ATLien666]

Yeah, you might have done better to perfect ya flow first. No disrespect, but it's really jarring and makes it hard to listen to. The lyrics sounded straight tho.

tbh, I wasn't tripping too much on it. I ain't think it sounded that bad and I just let it ride. Didn't feel like rerecording a little freestyle.

[tmillzy]

off here and there but its a freestyle. still got something i want you on fam.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

might be the only one but when you go offf beat then get back on beat it sounds kinda dope tbh

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and you ripped this more than me tbh

[THA GR8 M8]

ur flow on this was pretty good. i didnt really notice anything bad. but this beat is so simply and so dope that anyone gon sound incredible on it lol lyrics were pretty cool, caught a couple movie references in there. u seem to throw those in a lot i notice lol quality sounded p dope too (was listening on my iphone). 3/5 for a freestyle

[ATLien666]

off here and there but its a freestyle. still got something i want you on fam.

send it my way, bruh.

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off here and there but its a freestyle. still got something i want you on fam.

send it my way, bruh.

might be the only one but when you go offf beat then get back on beat it sounds kinda dope tbh

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and you ripped this more than me tbh

'preciate it, bruh. I ain't think the flow was that bad, I was vibing to it, lol. hell nah, you dropped yours? but right on, my nigga.

ur flow on this was pretty good. i didnt really notice anything bad. but this beat is so simply and so dope that anyone gon sound incredible on it lol lyrics were pretty cool, caught a couple movie references in there. u seem to throw those in a lot i notice lol quality sounded p dope too (was listening on my iphone). 3/5 for a freestyle

you ain't lying, but right on, bruh. yeah, I was tryna cram in random pop culture shit. I think this the first verse I tried some different things on with the mixing and shit, so that's good to hear.