KA$H-Make Ya (Live From Mars Single)

[tmillzy]

Second official single from Live From Mars! Performed this at club wax and obsessions over the past two weekends and they loved it. Dj's showing hella love for it too hopefully I can move something with this. Video probably gonna be shot in a month too!

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[Flame Beats]

Half expected it to be produced by me.
Nice Versace flow. 4/5

[tmillzy]

Half expected it to be produced by me.
Nice Versace flow. 4/5

Lol I need some more beats for my next project. Hit my email with the work bro kmobforever@gmail.com

[__cas__]

This was pretty dope. Like said before I fuck with the flow. 4/5.

[Milli Tune]

So:
+Flow
+Mainstream Voice
+You sound more like u, not like Weezy
+/- Lyrics
+/- Hook
-Beat
Ka$h u know Imma your big fan haha and u've got that what im looking for in rappers style but in my opinion second track from "Live From Mars" should be better. I rly dont like this beat, it makes this song a lil bit boring imo. All saving your voice and your flow. I also like that u're growin up and flow going your own way, its cool. Lyrics only (+/-) cuz I didnt heard any "WOW" lanes, just decent.
Waiting for more unique track cuz I know u can do it bro. U have got my follow but today only 3.5/5.

Milli Tune.

[mykill]

First verse was weak as hell. Hook was repetitious. Filter voice wasnt done as well as it could be. Needs reverb I think and maybe slight delay. Second verse was weak too. Needs to be stereo'd more too - it's too centered. Third verse was mediocre... I'm surprised. I really was expecting some solid punches, as you're always 100% on, but not a one. Hook needs harmonies now that I think of it... Something subtle. It also seems really short after the third verse. If you got contacts with this producer, see if he can extend it down so it can sound more like a break down and repeat the hook again. Know what I mean?

The vibe you had when you made this song was good. I can tell you were really vibing to this beat, but I don't think you wanna got 100% with these verses.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[tmillzy]

@Milli Tune & @mykill coming at my neck for this one. I understand what yall saying no standout lines and no punchlines from the kid. I wanted it just like that. It was different for me and the beat just felt so chill that I felt it didn't need those "moment of amazement" lines kept it plane jane. Is everyone so used to me sounding like wayne that when I do put out stuff like this it sucks??? LMAO However It's really for whoever likes it in the end. Preciate the feed!

[mykill]

@Milli Tune & @mykill coming at my neck for this one. I understand what yall saying no standout lines and no punchlines from the kid. I wanted it just like that. It was different for me and the beat just felt so chill that I felt it didn't need those "moment of amazement" lines kept it plane jane. Is everyone so used to me sounding like wayne that when I do put out stuff like this it sucks??? LMAO However It's really for whoever likes it in the end. Preciate the feed!

Heh, I wasnt trying to shoot you down, just sayin' if you're gonna put this on the album and I listen to it - Imma skip it. Even as a fan, it disappointed me. It's not a bad track, just like you said - it didnt resonate with me. Other will like it.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

song sucks bro.
we want the weezy version of kash back bro.
you know how people say "just be yourself"? DONT DO THAT!
this was just too boring.
be weezy, and we will like your shit again.

[tmillzy]

Well shit if this is bad I gotta plenty other hard ones on the album to make up for it I aint trippin

[Milli Tune]

@Milli Tune & @mykill coming at my neck for this one. I understand what yall saying no standout lines and no punchlines from the kid. I wanted it just like that. It was different for me and the beat just felt so chill that I felt it didn't need those "moment of amazement" lines kept it plane jane. Is everyone so used to me sounding like wayne that when I do put out stuff like this it sucks??? LMAO However It's really for whoever likes it in the end. Preciate the feed!

Heh, I wasnt trying to shoot you down, just sayin' if you're gonna put this on the album and I listen to it - Imma skip it. Even as a fan, it disappointed me. It's not a bad track, just like you said - it didnt resonate with me. Other will like it.

Yee Ka$h. Like mykill said we didnt want to shoot you down and I understand u wanted to do chill track. Anyway I think even as chill track it could sound better. Look at your song "No more", its chill track and sounds amazing. It's not about you as rapper, the composition of song is just weak, to weak to put it on your mixtape. But do your thang, if u will put that on LFM i will just skip this like mykill said.

[My Hubbie]

what ever happened to your track with Trinidad James? I used to bump the snippet