Cas - Paper Chaser

[__cas__]

throwaway off my tape, check it.



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[Zimmie]

them punchlines brah
"All these bitches want me like a wedding ring"
"Like your album we never drop"
"im so dope call me methamphetamine"

Flow is top notch
really liking the beat

really great track

(However i understand why its a throwaway)

[__cas__]

appreciate it man

[mykill]

I can tell this was a throwaway, from the first four lines. You gotta bring that real heat in the first 8 bars or most bloggers dont even acknowledge your existence. The "3-6-9...12" line was real clever. I'm not a fan of autotune you added to your voice. Seems like a distraction. You have a unique voice and that just makes you sound like everyone else. Maintain your individualism. Flow is immaculate at times. That's definitely your strongest ability.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.9/5

[__cas__]

I can tell this was a throwaway, from the first four lines. You gotta bring that real heat in the first 8 bars or most bloggers dont even acknowledge your existence. The "3-6-9...12" line was real clever. I'm not a fan of autotune you added to your voice. Seems like a distraction. You have a unique voice and that just makes you sound like everyone else. Maintain your individualism. Flow is immaculate at times. That's definitely your strongest ability.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.9/5

Word. Appreciate the detailed feedback man. I didn't even mean for auto tune to be on here. I got lazy with the pitch correct and decided it was a throwaway before I even finished it lol.

And yeah, I'm feeling like flow is very important especially nowadays so that's what I focus on.

BTW my bad on flaking on the sh!t remix ... yous killed it though.

[Milli Tune]

So:
BIG+ Flow
+Whole track
+Hot punches
+Beat
+Voice effects
+Autotune...
+/-...but try better settings
Rly good job man. Ain't see any bigger defects. IMHO whole track sounds like everything is on place. Your voice is different, your flow is strong. Rly good job! Only those autotune settings could be better but anyway im big fan of AT productions so u got + from me. I give u 4.6/5. Not 5/5 cuz this track, though is good, rly good, don't sound like full mainstream. But u have short way to walk! Keep it & will be fine!

PS: And I rly love this moment "3, 6, 9... 12" so clear!

Milli Tune

[__cas__]

So:
BIG+ Flow
+Whole track
+Hot punches
+Beat
+Voice effects
+Autotune...
+/-...but try better settings
Rly good job man. Ain't see any bigger defects. IMHO whole track sounds like everything is on place. Your voice is different, your flow is strong. Rly good job! Only those autotune settings could be better but anyway im big fan of AT productions so u got + from me. I give u 4.6/5. Not 5/5 cuz this track, though is good, rly good, don't sound like full mainstream. But u have short way to walk! Keep it & will be fine!

PS: And I rly love this moment "3, 6, 9... 12" so clear!

Milli Tune

yooo appreciate all that feedback! glad you like it!

[tmillzy]

like it bro punchlines are too dope!