J.A.I - Better Eat Ya Words (feat. Creature)

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Hey there yall, J.A.I here with a song that i just made with my label mate creature. I based this song of off tha haters that were wrong bout us you know? really its jus a fun trap record.

Criticism is welcome cause you see, i compare being an artist is like caring for a child. You gotta care for it, make sure it goes in the right direction, make its future is bright and clear. So as i raise my child persay, i crave advice on raising my child if you catch my drift.

Thank u for ur time,

- J.A.I (Of PsychoZ On The Street)


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[knudtsen]

damn, that was actually freaking good

[tmillzy]

We need to collab definitely on my type of shit bro. Dope ass track!

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

We need to collab definitely on my type of shit bro. Dope ass track!

Lets do it bro, im a fan of your musik too, just msg me whenever u got a track u want me on, ill even hit u up wit trakkz too

[Flame Beats]

dope flow and beat.






[MENTION=49321]tmillzy[/MENTION] x [MENTION=4663]Dezi-Do Rhyt[/MENTION] x [MENTION=66413]Flame Beats[/MENTION] ?

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

dope flow and beat.






@tmillzy x @Dezi-Do Rhyt x @Flame Beats ?

Let's do it yall! im ready whenever you guys are if your down

[tmillzy]

Let's do it yall! im ready whenever you guys are if your down

Yup lets do some crazy. Im working on my mixtape any way [MENTION=66413]Flame Beats[/MENTION]

[mykill]

Let's do it yall! im ready whenever you guys are if your down

but i'm sayin'.... can a Mod get in on this? lol

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Your rapping reminds me of me... Hmmm... Not a lot of standout lines from this, but the flow and composition of the track wasnt 1/2 bad. You definitely should work on your lyrics and improve that a bit. Comes with time and practice. Nice work.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.4