Rembrandt - Anger ft. Kami de Chukwu

[ATLien666]

Finally dropped the finished version of this track featuring Kami de Chukwu from SAVEMONEY. One of the few features on the tape. I ain't really have the perfect time to drop it, so fuck it.



feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...cht-intro.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ike-wayne.html

[youngben]

Flow - i fuck with the flow; but it could use some work with syllable counting.

Lyrics - dope, could be better in spots and i'm sure u could spot those spots. Some of the lines really stood out to me though

Delivery/Mic presence - really good.

[ATLien666]

Flow - i fuck with the flow; but it could use some work with syllable counting.

Lyrics - dope, could be better in spots and i'm sure u could spot those spots. Some of the lines really stood out to me though

Delivery/Mic presence - really good.

'preciate it, bruh. Yeah, Imma try working on syllable counting and different rhyme schemes.

[mykill]

Kami came in on this shit aggressive as fuck... Dayuuum son.... Shoulda let em spit some more bars...

This beat was a good choice... I likes... Mixing was pretty dope on this too. You had some good lines in this one. Flow was pretty on point too. WHERE IS THAT FUCKING TAPE ALREADY!?!?! lol

Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5

[ATLien666]

Kami came in on this shit aggressive as fuck... Dayuuum son.... Shoulda let em spit some more bars...

This beat was a good choice... I likes... Mixing was pretty dope on this too. You had some good lines in this one. Flow was pretty on point too. WHERE IS THAT FUCKING TAPE ALREADY!?!?! lol

Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5

Yeah, he went hard on this. The tape is gonna drop soon, ahaha. I'm about to start being a lot more consistent this month. But appreciate the feedback, bruh bruh.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Game of thrones line

overall this thing is nice bars and flow was on point no slip ups that i notice

[Zimmie]

i like that effect you used when you were talking about being a 'monster'
lyrics are pretty nice
beat and production are both fantastic

one negative i guess is your flow can feel a little awkward and monotone sometimes i have the same problem myself when i rap haha

4/5 id have to say

[Tha Professor]

Pretty sick, but i dunno if the mixing is all that as [MENTION=20888]mykill[/MENTION] says, I feel like your syllables should come out more clear.

[ATLien666]

I appreciate all the feedback. Glad to hear ya'll fuck with this. I've been slacking on posting, but I just got a new setup and shit, so I'mma be recording a lot more. Plus I'll be done with school in like a month so Monster is dropping soon for real this time, lol.

[MC_Crary]

That Sharon Tate line though>

Always loved your voice man. You sound like your having fun every time. Your conscious style appeals to me but I always love it when you go had too. The "trap" style beats work well for you and you bring that signature Remy style.Nice, fitting Drake dub. And your feature was awesome too. Wished for a longer verse from him but keep em coming back for more I guess. Waiting for that tape bro.

[ATLien666]

That Sharon Tate line though>

Always loved your voice man. You sound like your having fun every time. Your conscious style appeals to me but I always love it when you go had too. The "trap" style beats work well for you and you bring that signature Remy style.Nice, fitting Drake dub. And your feature was awesome too. Wished for a longer verse from him but keep em coming back for more I guess. Waiting for that tape bro.

'preciate that a lot, man. yeah, I kinda regret not getting a longer verse, but I didn't wanna have too many features on the first tape, idk. But I'm almost done. Recording a couple of songs, then I might rerecord some and cut some shit. want something concise.