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[Iamnezzy]

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[tmillzy]

Definitely hear the drake influence on this. Production is dope. Voice fits perfect and mixed well too. Overall its a dope chill song keep going!

[mykill]

I find it hilarious that you're talking about "rap clones" in this, yet you still so many styles and flows and ideas from so many main stream rappers. Drake... Wayne... You bite so hard on this whole song, yet you want to comment about "clones"????

That aside, the lyrics are very vapid. Lyrically this is garbage. There's so many ass and anal references in the first minute that I would typically just pause after the first two, but since you're new and I'm the mod I decided to give ti a full listen so that I could give you proper feedback. First guy's flow is > Second guy. Your deliveries and flows are what carry this tune. Beat is pretty good too. Work on diversifying and maturing your lyrical prowess, then come back harder.

Mykill's Verdict: Go read the rules please. Oh!... 3.1/5

[youngben]

Flow - keep it up

Delivery - keep it up

lyrics - improve em. if you improve these and take em seriously.. u could be great.

Keep going bro, you already got the majority of rapping down