J.A.I - Bounce It (Prod. By KidTzar)

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Hey yall, heres another song i made called "bounce it". Everybody in the bay be spittin on these function
beats, so i just decided to do one too. Fun lil partyin hit. Criticism welcome, thank you!

- J.A.I

Feedback:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ike-wayne.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...t-em-down.html

[mykill]

Lyrics are kind of elementary. You might want to take some time to better develop your lines and trying to be more creative. Put more vocabulary in it. Flow is ok, but you could improve it a bit with practice and make it more smooth. I'd suggest reading up on how to write punchlines and trying to include more of that into a song like this. Wasnt that bad of a song, but you can clearly tell in the areas you need improvement.

How often do you record?

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[tmillzy]

Im definitely down for the album feature bro

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Im definitely down for the album feature bro

fasho man ill send u tha song right now