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  • concept/story rap PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK

    i posted this in the random topic thread but i thought id post it here as well

    so im working on a song that tells the story in the perspective of a prostitute (sort of like "Keshias Song" or "brenda's got a baby") and i have a beginning and its still a working project but id just like to know what you guys think of it so far?


    "4 lone tires pull up the gravel street
    the shadow of a stranger sits in the front seat
    there eyes meet shes called up to the window
    a gringo, discussions with the essence of an innuendo"




    #FREEVELVET
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