i posted this in the random topic thread but i thought id post it here as well
so im working on a song that tells the story in the perspective of a prostitute (sort of like "Keshias Song" or "brenda's got a baby") and i have a beginning and its still a working project but id just like to know what you guys think of it so far?
"4 lone tires pull up the gravel street
the shadow of a stranger sits in the front seat
there eyes meet shes called up to the window
a gringo, discussions with the essence of an innuendo"
so im working on a song that tells the story in the perspective of a prostitute (sort of like "Keshias Song" or "brenda's got a baby") and i have a beginning and its still a working project but id just like to know what you guys think of it so far?
"4 lone tires pull up the gravel street
the shadow of a stranger sits in the front seat
there eyes meet shes called up to the window
a gringo, discussions with the essence of an innuendo"