J Smooth x Cli-City (Unreleased) - Crownless Kings

[Cli-City]

This is a joint we did for the homies project but he never released so i thought i would resurrect the unfinished version



http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1267511

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...mazin-hkc.html

[ATLien666]

Man, J Smooth is a fucking problem, smh.

but goddamn, man. "Who says bigger means better? What's a giant to a sling?" But to be honest, the beginning of your verse is so much better than the rest of it. The line about your daughter was dope, too. But I feel lyrically, you stepped it all the way up coming into your verse and it slowly tapered off. Nice flow but your delivery is kinda boring to me. Overall, this song is really fucking dope. Good concept and solid verses from both of you.

The only negative thing I can think of is that I wish your verse was mixed like Smooth's; other than that, I ain't got shit bad to say about it. Good shit.

[mykill]

There's an open verse at the end...

You know what happens when I find songs with open verses....

That aside, I really wish you guys would make more music. Its good to hear from the two of you more. i don't play enough attention to twitter, so I don't know what Smooth is up to and you have your daughter to take care of now, but just like I tell 'Royce all the time - The world needs more JSmooth and Cli-City. This is song is a testament to that ideal. Great teamwork, great lyrics, great flows. Concept to product, you guys knocked it out of the park. Now, if you could only finish this up...

Mykill's Verdict: 4.1/5