Fly Wit' Me Video

[yungfamou5]

Im still workin on my videos, with different scenes, story lines, angles, etc so leave some feedback on what I can improve on

http://youtu.be/30GviGZa7OE

Feedback:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...a-killurz.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...fm-single.html

[ATLien666]

wasn't feeling the first chorus, but you started feeling yourself more in the verse and got your energy up. I like that your video does kinda have a story with it instead of just random shit, fit the song better. You got good camera angles, imo. the quality wasn't the best and not doing it full screen was an odd choice , plus some of the transitions were kinda distracting. but it showed directing skills so i fuck with it.

[yungfamou5]

Appreciate it, let me get more use to directing and editing, ima try to drop at least 2 or 3 more videos for the summer

[mykill]

I agree with a lot of points by Rembrandt. I would say watch some more videos and work harder trying to imitate that look or style. Some of my best mixing and song ideas come from me trying to emulate a mixing technique I heard on the radio or come up with a concept that I enjoyed from another artist, so the best way to improve is trying to pull off what big budget artists do without that kind of backing. You'd be surprised how top-notch you can make something seem without the thousands of dollars behind you. Nice job.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5 (Video), 3.8/5 (Song)

[yungfamou5]

Appreciate it, I see some things I could've fixed and yes I do watch videos lol I pay attention to how the scenes change

[Checkmatemuzick]

dey pretty much covered everything I would say use ah different editing program you'll never do yourself justice using windows movie editor

[yungfamou5]

Lol I agree but I do t nothin but any programs, any suggestions?

[Checkmatemuzick]

Lol I agree but I do t nothin but any programs, any suggestions?

Mac - Final Cut
PC - Vegas or After Effects