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    Im from Poland but I try write in US English. Could u check sense or any mistakes in this lyrics?

    My flow just bought new 'Rarri/
    I stepped into your house, shoot somebody/
    Then I left your brains on the couch, then picked up your girl and took her to Cali, um/
    I can make a lot of money/
    I can have your head and your honey/
    D M G we runnin, u can call us polish Young Money, aaa/
    I ain't even greener but they usually call me alien/
    So you know I'm outo' this world, I'm human, I'm just different.../
    They kiddnapped my flow/
    And putted it to the riffle/
    So I'm shootin' so I'm shootin' this is AK 47/
    These lyrics like bullets send you to the hell or heaven!/
    Originality mudafucker/
    I rather be slave than y'all mudafuckers! Ey/
    Female voice: Weezy?
    Lil Wayne: Yeah?
    Female voice: Where u goin'?
    Lil Wayne: ...up!
    Female voice: You're goin' a lil' bit to far.
    Lil Wayne: Hihaaaaaaa!!!

    Weezy - Up Up & Away

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    My flow just bought new 'Rarri/
    I stepped into your house, shot somebody/
    Then I left your brains on the couch, then picked up your girl and took her to Cali, um/
    I can make a lot of money/
    I can have your head and your honey/
    D M G we runnin, u can call us polish Young Money, aaa/
    I ain't even green but they usually call me alien/
    So you know I'm out of this world, I'm human, I'm just different.../
    They kiddnapped my flow/
    And put it to the riffle/
    So I'm shootin' so I'm shootin' this is AK 47/
    These lyrics like bullets send you to the hell or heaven!/
    Originality mudafucker/
    I'd rather be a slave than y'all mudafuckers! Ey/

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    • #3
      Originally posted by WeEeEeEzZzZyYy View Post
      My flow just bought new 'Rarri/
      I stepped into your house, shot somebody/
      Then I left your brains on the couch, then picked up your girl and took her to Cali, um/
      I can make a lot of money/
      I can have your head and your honey/
      D M G we runnin, u can call us polish Young Money, aaa/
      I ain't even green but they usually call me alien/
      So you know I'm out of this world, I'm human, I'm just different.../
      They kiddnapped my flow/
      And put it to the riffle/
      So I'm shootin' so I'm shootin' this is AK 47/
      These lyrics like bullets send you to the hell or heaven!/
      Originality mudafucker/
      I'd rather be a slave than y'all mudafuckers! Ey/
      Thank u! I thought that I did more mistakes xD

      Can I ask u?
      1. Can i use word Greener not green cuz its fits better for me or it's hard mistake and i cant? Or if I can't can I use verse "I ain't became greeener, but they usually call me alien"?
      2. Why put not putted?
      3. Can i say Outo' because I tread it like faster version of out of.
      Last edited by Milli Tune; 06-03-2014, 04:54 PM.
      Female voice: Weezy?
      Lil Wayne: Yeah?
      Female voice: Where u goin'?
      Lil Wayne: ...up!
      Female voice: You're goin' a lil' bit to far.
      Lil Wayne: Hihaaaaaaa!!!

      Weezy - Up Up & Away

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Milli Tune View Post
        Thank u! I thought that I did more mistakes xD

        Can I ask u?
        1. Can i use word Greener not green cuz its fits better for me or it's hard mistake and i cant? Or if I can't can I use verse "I ain't became greeener, but they usually call me alien"?
        2. Why put not putted?
        3. Can i say Outo' because I tread it like faster version of out of.
        greener doesn't really make sense but if u really want to u can use it

        putted is not a word and makes zero sense lol

        outo is not a world either but i guess u could use 'outta'

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