Ice Explicit - No Motive

[SupraTyson]

Here's the intro track of an EP I recorded bout 2/3 months back - Please leave me some feedback!



Feedback:
1) http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1291255

2)http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...irst-beat.html

[mykill]

Needs some work on the mixing side. Flow could use some animation. You're kinda monotone with it. Your mic presence is there, but your deliver is kind of boring. Even now as I listen more, I don't think its a mixing thing either. It might just be the delivery part. Work on your delivery, try to be more animated when you deliver and add more excitement. There seems to be a hiccup in the mix at the 1.46 mark. Lyrics are better than some. I like that you actually gave it some thought and put something out with more substance than just weed rap and talking about hoes. Not to say those things are bad, it just the market so saturated with it now adays.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.4/5

[WizHeezy]

The intro to this song tho