Joe $crilla - "2"

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Hey yall, it's J.A.I, just now I go by Joe $crilla, tryna reinvent myself.

Here's a snippet i just put up called "Queen's Image", just a fun lil love song i made, criticism always welcome (not my best work)



Hope you guys like what you hear!

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1291495

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1289737

[mykill]

Trippy vibe. It's cool that you're experimenting with stuff. I feel like the verse kind meanders around without any true direction. Maybe go back and make it more concise?

Mykill's Verdict: 3.5/5

[Milli Tune]

+Vibe
-/+ a lil bit boring to me
-/+ beat

U got that good vibe rly but u have to work more on yourself. Imo this track is decent but boring. Keep good work and will be better 3/5

[Zimmie]

the beat and vibe are fantastic verse was crap though.

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Thanks for the criticism yall, just letting everyone know that this is just a lil sneak peek of the end, the song sounds completely different. Its bein uploaded later this month so ill put the full thing on here when its out. Keep the comments going!