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    Nigga I'm slow mo? More like go go
    This shit that I'm smokin got my eyes on low low
    You need to bounce like pogo
    Before we tangle like a yoyo
    Nigga I been dope, since I was rockin them sketchers
    fuck with me I'll stretch ya and have you leaving on a stretcher
    I ain't gonna stress ya
    Cuz people like you don't really phase me
    Its the people like you that are typically hating
    Pussy nigga who you playing?
    I'll have that AK spraying
    Just to go to ya funeral and watch everybody praying.
    I just bought a house in hip hops residence
    Not just any house, the white house, I'm hip hops president
    Do I got your vote? I hope so, i'm tryna stay relevant.
    In terms of terms. I'll serve like ten of em'
    Don't fuck with me, I'm like 50, behind me I got many many many men.
    Riding with the windows tinted bitch
    Incognito, tell the people play they position or there position will be feeble
    Follow me I'll lead em right after I beat em
    Beat em black and blue, throw em over my shoulder, now I'm covered in bruises
    Music is my blanket, they ain't sleeping on me
    The only time you're on top of me is when this boy is dreaming
    But I don't even dream, I'm a nightmare giving rappers white hair
    Sitting on my high chair with a fork and a bib
    Cuz when I get to going I'm messy with this shit trick
    I just number 2'd it but I'm still number 1, point proven, I'm done.
    Raised up by myself since my father didnt bother
    But I'm not a bastard, I'm the outcome of what the rap game fathered
    You spit garbage, put you in the disposal and dispose of you
    Pick a card jack, king me while I take your queen and fold you like I'm supposed to do
    Got locked up, looked at the judge he said I didnt do this to you, the rap game sentenced you
    I said what I gotta do? He said rap until you push up dafedills
    I said what's the deal? He said throw some change in the game and pay the price
    So I got life? I guess so just stay low. I told em I cant do that I gotta get high
    He said keep it low when them cops drive by
    Ain't gotta say that twice
    But I asked if I spit bars around these boys does that put em in a prison?
    He said nahh just as long as you dont kill em
    But these boys I be killin just to make a living
    You see the choices that I'm givin?
    Die rappin, let's make it happen
    I'm happy the rap game birthed me and had me
    Daddy gave no help, he didnt even didnt wrap it. I went from semen to a fetus to a grown man with no help, believe it.
    But I rap it now, how I father this rap game now.
    But I dont claim hip hop
    Most of them pop and make they hips pop and people seem to hop
    But when I get on top, imma put it on lock and throw the key off
    And cut my dick off so all y'all that hopped on fall off

  • #2
    sounds really amateurish reads just like the first rap i wrote which was absolute ass hahahaha maybe it would sound good on a song but for now its just na for me.


    Nigga I'm slow mo? More like go go
    This shit that I'm smokin got my eyes on low low
    You need to bounce like pogo
    Before we tangle like a yoyo

    this sounds really amateurish tbh

    But when I get on top, imma put it on lock and throw the key off
    And cut my dick off so all y'all that hopped on fall off




    #FREEVELVET

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