Tranquil - Visions (Demo)

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It has been way to long since I have posted here. I haven't really been focusing on my music that much but I'm starting to get back into it now. This track here is a demo, I've been working on this track for a few days now, and since i haven't put anything out for awhile, I thought I would give it a quick record and drop it.

Take a listen and Feedback would be most appreciated!



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[mykill]

Good energy... I think the mixing could use some tweaks here and there. Very conscious song with a good message. I think maybe you need to check your syllables and lyrics and try to form it to be more natural sounding, if you know what I mean. Some of it gets kind of "robotic" in flow and it takes away from the overall feeling.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

[ATLien666]

Pretty deep shit. I can see what mykill means about it getting a bit robotic at parts. If you just tighten those parts up and and work just a little bit more delivery wise, you'll be on point all around. Gotta check out more of your sounds for sure.