Alex Justice - Open Your Eyes (prod. by Alex Justice)

[Mr. Swag]

Wassup guys. So this track right here is the first thing me and my homie, Alex J, have ever made or put out or whatever, so let me know what you think. Keep in mind that we're both from Europe, so english is not our native language and that this is our first recorded song, produced by himself, background video made by me. We plan on puttin out a collabo mixtape with both his and my production, so any feedback is appreciated as far as quality, lyrics, beat or video goes. Thanks!





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[youngben]

Beat is average IMO

Flow could use some work in terms of counting syllables to stay on beat.

Lyrics are good and so is delivery. Your voice compliments the lyrics nicely.

[ATLien666]

Yeah, the beat is pretty average. Not bad but nothing particularly standout about it. Flow needs some work and the chorus is kinda oldschool sounding. Good voice and for a first song, not too bad either. Just needs some more work on staying on beat consistent, but the flow and lyrics are on point. Just keep practicing and making songs. Not bad.

[Mr. Swag]

Beat is average IMO

Flow could use some work in terms of counting syllables to stay on beat.

Lyrics are good and so is delivery. Your voice compliments the lyrics nicely.

Yeah, the beat is pretty average. Not bad but nothing particularly standout about it. Flow needs some work and the chorus is kinda oldschool sounding. Good voice and for a first song, not too bad either. Just needs some more work on staying on beat consistent, but the flow and lyrics are on point. Just keep practicing and making songs. Not bad.

Thanks guys, really any feedback is good for the Moment. Imma tell him and we'll See how it turns out next time.

[Mr. Swag]

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