Lost Freestyle - Ice Explicit

[SupraTyson]

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[Milli Tune]

So:
+ beat
+- flow
+- lyrics
-Quality
Apart from Quality witch is bad it's decent track if u are beginner. Flow is on point if we talk about tempo but u sound like you are afraid about that your mom will apear in your room and will catch u rappin XD. Work hard should be your no 1 rule.

2.7/5

[SupraTyson]

haha, well i mean i just didn't feel the need to scream on this beat since it was already at a pretty low volume but alright. And how is the quality bad? thought it sounded pretty ok...

[BandoLando]

I dont know if this was written or an actual freestyle but the lyrics could have been better. They werent bad tho.
The quality was great imo.

[SupraTyson]

wasnt an actual freestyle just went with that title, but yeah the lyrics were a bit basic due to me finding like my old lyric notpad from 2 years ago and recording them to this beat lol - but thanks

[Milli Tune]

Beat is to quiet. Your vocal quality is good, but quality of mix sucks. You sound a lil bit like u just recorded that and than put on beat without any mix
And emotions on the track ain't mean you have to scream on it.

[SupraTyson]

exactly what i did haha

[mykill]

You sound a lil bit like u just recorded that and than put on beat without any mix
And emotions on the track ain't mean you have to scream on it.

Nailed it. I totally agree. Why not just put the beat on and try to actually freestyle to it? I do it often and it sometimes comes out pretty decent. Not the best lyrically, but still fun stuff to listen to and do from time to time.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.1/5

[DatWeezy]

The beat.. I can't ever take anyone for real who go in on an eminem beat.. That's just cuz that man is GOAT. I have done a few em beats way back when i started tho so i understand..

Anyways,

Flow: 2.5/5 - I feel like you could have flowed it better & came with a better delivery homie.. Idk, if it was a freestyle it's ight i guess, but it could have came better.. maybe just the way u wrote it, if that;s what u did.

Lyrcis: 2.5/5 Nothing that stood out to me, made me think "damn, that was dope" but they were decent..

Quality: Mixing wasn't bad, you'll get better with time. 3/5

Overall: I give this a 2.8/5 cuz of the delivery & flow dawg, work on that. Not hatin' just sayin..