"Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

[ScHeEzZ]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... tent=music

first two songs ever recorded. give them a listen, & shoot some feedback my way.
lyrics are sick. don't deny it. haha. mic quality is a little poor because i use my laptop. haha.

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lyrics
"hold the beat ransom"

it's scheezy motherfucker, or it's just scheezz instead
yeah i beat the beat to death like there's a bounty on it's head
your girl lost my number, then found me in her bed
and we don't count stacks no more, (no) just loaves of bread
smokin weed so potent that it leaves us in a coma
& it's hittin with such force that we call the green "yoda"
your girl call me over then pinned me to the sofa
& tell me she just wanna blow me like the bubbles in my soda
what's up with all these dude's swag? so boring
i cause traffic jams - you cause snoring
if you fly, shit, i must be soaring
i'm too cold to step to like the shower in the morning
respect is what you want? well you gotta start earnin' it
scheezz stay clean, my detergent so permanent
take you down, you won't wanna get up like a school day
& if you battle twice, you get two L's like you're Cool J
juggernaut flow, yeah there ain't no stoppin me
i run this game like the shoe in monopoly
your girl jockin me, but no i won't be callin her
your boy so sick, bro, i stay with a thermometer
any fuckin track, you know i'm goin in
just caall me "the grenade" i'm explosive with the pen
get another beat, yeah bring the beast a challenge
it takes years to develop skill but the best are born with talent.

"ice cream scheezzjob" (more focus on flow)

it's scheezy, word to your whole crew:
stop walkin all up on me homie i don't know you
HEY baby baby, why the hell you frownin?
swag make you turn that and your body upside down &
took her to the crib, had her on the couch, then
sent her to hundunna now she's sackin up his ounces (hundunna's a nickname for a friend of mine)
blunt got me higher, than your average mountain
had your girl last night; is that a pussy or a fountain?
she's performin on the dick & now she's bowin
got payed last wednesday & we're still countin
punchin bag swag, yeah it's everlastin
i am the answer to whatever question you are askin
track star charm, they say that i'm dashin
& ladies break they necks everytime that i'm passin
it's scheezz, mothafucker who else go harder?
grab the game with force & said "bitch, i am your father"
word to all the dads, yeah lock away your daughter
'cause she broke me off a peace so i called her ass a "martyr"
spittin sick shit, dog what is the formula?
real recognize real, what is in your cornea?
remember my name, yup, hotter than florida
treat the beat like bad art & just tore it up.

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

damn! these are old, sorry i'm bumping them for no reason. still open for feedback. i'll be picking up a mic tomorrow because i plan on taking it bit more seriously to see how things develop, so if you don't think they're half-bad, there will be more coming.

also, i know i have some things to work on -> but SERIOUSLY don't steal my lines haha

[TheDude]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

SERIOUSLY don't steal my lines

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

that was a joke. my bad, sarcasm doesn't translate well via computers.
but thanks for the feedback. keep it moving -->

[TygaPride]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

that was a joke. my bad, sarcasm doesn't translate well via computers.
but thanks for the feedback. keep it moving -->

put a little grin there
it helps alot.. lol

nice beat tho.. forreal doe.

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

damn this shit is hot! O=

scheezy in this bitch

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

haha, thanks quil. the 'ice cream paint job' one is a lot better than 'ransom' flow-wise, but lyrically 'ransom' is better.


& i know i have ways to go, shit to work on, but these were also recorded in '09.

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

haha, thanks quil. the 'ice cream paint job' one is a lot better than 'ransom' flow-wise, but lyrically 'ransom' is better.


& i know i have ways to go, shit to work on, but these were also recorded in '09.

they sound like you had fun on them. that's why I love listening to Soulja Boy so much (i hope you don't take that as an insult lol).
and on top of that you have mad talent, you should go on recording tbvfh.

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

i appreciate it, big time man. and i plan to, i've written and fucked around with it on & off for years, next week i'll pick up a mic, as this was done with whatever one was built in with my webcam, lol.

uppin

[akkucc]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

hey this is really good i like it man,lyrics is cool though,

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

hey this is really good i like it man,lyrics is cool though,

appreciate it, player!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: "Hold the Beat Ransom" & "Ice Cream Scheezzjob"

not bad bro, keep it up.