Last Laugh (Prod. King Kailez) [Free Hip Hop Instrumental DL]

[Laudacity93]

Just posted this Instrumental to my Sound Cloud..It's a FREE DL..Feel free to hop on it and post your link in the thread if you do so. Just give me credit.

feedback: 1 & 2

[Theonlydjorkaeff]

Just posted this Instrumental to my Sound Cloud..It's a FREE DL..Feel free to hop on it and post your link in the thread if you do so. Just give me credit.

feedback: 1 & 2

yo it might take me a few days but i am gonna hop on this one homie

[Laudacity93]

Word, I'm interested in hearing what you come up with.

[mykill]

Some of the sounds kind of sound generic. Check some sound packs and try some things out. Something that sounds more natural. That synth might not be the best, but the strings are on point. The arrangements are good too. The open hat is good. Or you know what, just check the mixing on the synth. I think mixing it differently would make it sound like it has better depth.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.9/5

[Laudacity93]

Some of the sounds kind of sound generic. Check some sound packs and try some things out. Something that sounds more natural. That synth might not be the best, but the strings are on point. The arrangements are good too. The open hat is good. Or you know what, just check the mixing on the synth. I think mixing it differently would make it sound like it has better depth.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.9/5

Thanks for the feedback. This was one of my earlier instrumentals this year and probably one of my worst that's why I released it for free. I didn't really have the knowledge that I do now as far as producing goes. What do you think about the drum programming?

[Theonlydjorkaeff]

Just posted this Instrumental to my Sound Cloud..It's a FREE DL..Feel free to hop on it and post your link in the thread if you do so. Just give me credit.

feedback: 1 & 2

Dropping off my lyrics

I recorded yesterday but only initial. might take a few days to get a decent performance down, ultra busy with shit atm

you're on the forums safe and warm all with your little clique
then one day some stray flew right by and caught your little dick
do you respond or just show palms and show this dude the cliff?
don't even sweat this shit, hq is just a click

don't worry friends i cant descend to levels mined by you
you're bringing copper and steal but i'm still shining true
Like a Diamond do, 10k I'm eyeing you
my savings basting my crew and all my family's food
that's right I'm cooking fools
Just like a Brooklyn dude
Just like Jay I'm getting paid from working kitchen tools
fillet and michelin rules
with oil fine real crude
I hit the blog the next day and count my thousand views
I'm stacking analytics
all this I'm just a critic
I sit back watching the counter jump and start to Ribbit
And now the fly's are livid
Mosquitoes die in inches
whilst my peers confide in me, they're always itchin
they want the ritches they think that that will bring the bitches
I see them twitching with kitsch sites and fetish listings
They're thinking holistic
They're screaming HOE LICK IT!
a guy I know hit my twit thing with a deep question
a girl explained that if he paid then she was gon let him
A hoe's a hoe, but for 5 I said just go get it
now he's dripping with juice and it ain't from her wetness..
she had stacked the deck and he's got a broken weapon


I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
2:03


Paper chasing is making loud mouths feel like theyve made it
they're on their grind daily waiting, just anticipating
it's just a treadmill in the end its your sweat thats payment
and now you're up in my face and I'm just steady faded
I lie awake and debate whether I should just take it
Complicit to your hating keeping my rage nice and latent
but sitting on this filling keeps me jacked and heart racing
my face is early ageing
your face is straight enraging!
SO uncage me
beast mode you bitch stop apeing me
stop nitpicking my acts behind my fucking back
if Australia was back - wards I'd have a fucking gat
and straight aim at your trap and clap clap
The only ovation I have or ever will have earned
A mentally ill dude and now I've gone and gotten spurned
your dad's fucking sperm should've stained her fucking perm
now your lap is filled with synaptic worms I'm not acting like Will Smith will make you squirm
And the Wesson asks the question will you ever learn?
the gat in my lap won;t even burn
My hands are too cold to permeate the firm

I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this


2:58
3:24

the final verse is for those struggling with self worth
maybe a friend disowned you or your girl shirked
You kept asking when and she kept blowing you off
or the problem was just that, she wasnt blowing you off
Never bend to accomodate anothers rules
Society follows it's own path and that path is crude
It's not wrong to be rude, It's not illegal to cheat
It's not a crime to despise every person you meet
If it was I'd be locked up and they'd destroy the key
don't bleat to me about blackened sheep
Widen your eyes / and pray on their demise
And when that plate is full of mutton breath deep and eat
don't just stop at the gut keep eating till you reach the feet
fill up on the cleats and gas your own jeep with gristled meat
suck out the marrow
fill up your barrow
cause you never do know when the next drought will explode

[Laudacity93]

Dropping off my lyrics

I recorded yesterday but only initial. might take a few days to get a decent performance down, ultra busy with shit atm

you're on the forums safe and warm all with your little clique
then one day some stray flew right by and caught your little dick
do you respond or just show palms and show this dude the cliff?
don't even sweat this shit, hq is just a click

don't worry friends i cant descend to levels mined by you
you're bringing copper and steal but i'm still shining true
Like a Diamond do, 10k I'm eyeing you
my savings basting my crew and all my family's food
that's right I'm cooking fools
Just like a Brooklyn dude
Just like Jay I'm getting paid from working kitchen tools
fillet and michelin rules
with oil fine real crude
I hit the blog the next day and count my thousand views
I'm stacking analytics
all this I'm just a critic
I sit back watching the counter jump and start to Ribbit
And now the fly's are livid
Mosquitoes die in inches
whilst my peers confide in me, they're always itchin
they want the ritches they think that that will bring the bitches
I see them twitching with kitsch sites and fetish listings
They're thinking holistic
They're screaming HOE LICK IT!
a guy I know hit my twit thing with a deep question
a girl explained that if he paid then she was gon let him
A hoe's a hoe, but for 5 I said just go get it
now he's dripping with juice and it ain't from her wetness..
she had stacked the deck and he's got a broken weapon


I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
2:03


Paper chasing is making loud mouths feel like theyve made it
they're on their grind daily waiting, just anticipating
it's just a treadmill in the end its your sweat thats payment
and now you're up in my face and I'm just steady faded
I lie awake and debate whether I should just take it
Complicit to your hating keeping my rage nice and latent
but sitting on this filling keeps me jacked and heart racing
my face is early ageing
your face is straight enraging!
SO uncage me
beast mode you bitch stop apeing me
stop nitpicking my acts behind my fucking back
if Australia was back - wards I'd have a fucking gat
and straight aim at your trap and clap clap
The only ovation I have or ever will have earned
A mentally ill dude and now I've gone and gotten spurned
your dad's fucking sperm should've stained her fucking perm
now your lap is filled with synaptic worms I'm not acting like Will Smith will make you squirm
And the Wesson asks the question will you ever learn?
the gat in my lap won;t even burn
My hands are too cold to permeate the firm

I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this
I'm feeling less than serious
the xan has got me real delerious
my honda is imperious
you wont be fearing this, your ears are fearing this


2:58
3:24

the final verse is for those struggling with self worth
maybe a friend disowned you or your girl shirked
You kept asking when and she kept blowing you off
or the problem was just that, she wasnt blowing you off
Never bend to accomodate anothers rules
Society follows it's own path and that path is crude
It's not wrong to be rude, It's not illegal to cheat
It's not a crime to despise every person you meet
If it was I'd be locked up and they'd destroy the key
don't bleat to me about blackened sheep
Widen your eyes / and pray on their demise
And when that plate is full of mutton breath deep and eat
don't just stop at the gut keep eating till you reach the feet
fill up on the cleats and gas your own jeep with gristled meat
suck out the marrow
fill up your barrow
cause you never do know when the next drought will explode

Hell Yeah #Dope

[Theonlydjorkaeff]

Hell Yeah #Dope