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  • Sydney vs Everybody (Chi-raq Freestyle)

    One skinny white man's stand against the world..



    No chi raq this ain't Iraq raps more like Kim Jong un
    A bunch of big boys with big toys and lying tongues
    Hop in the studio, with hublots and Louis vittons
    Spit your sixteen like a blitzkrieg and then run home
    Just flung stones, now J Cole saying he's sorry
    He takes 2 steps but leans back like he's Joe's army
    Lil durk gets murked everytime he hits the mic
    How you gonna be a gangster and high with clouded sights?
    TXLis birthing Molly babies like Ira Chasnoff
    Half these new acts wouldn't beat beiber in a fucking rap off
    There's only a few acts that you wouldn't dare list as actors
    Yeah I said acts, But drizzy is stuck at zero
    Puff muffed his chuff he shoulda chewed his earlobe
    Cassidy, Lamar, ace hood and jadakiss
    SP em and 50 Cent, fucking aggressors
    They own, no paying rent
    You can autotune and do numbers like Asian kids
    But when the heat comes round be sure you plead the fifth
    Shit is sick, you got a schoolboy claiming he's a gangster
    Selling OxyContin to white girls, no twister fingers
    You've got the biggest fraud since Belfort in the fucking booth
    Saying rich is gangster like frank Lucas didn't get screwed
    The dude is living proof that our audience doesn't care
    Long as you got a phat beat your syllables sound sincere
    Robin thicke just tripped an entire class of Molly mashers
    Dancing to a hit that condoned fucking archaic standards
    And this track has no hook, so bet that when it's heard
    Everyone will turn off at the mention of those words
    But fuck it, I've more to say, and this won't be poetic
    Listen to my other shit I'm really fucking prophetic
    But I'm fucking sick to death with the rubbish rappers are peddling
    It feels like a lot of steps we're intellectually descending
    One minute jays on the track rapping about Picasso
    The next he's shouting Marcy like he's not scared to drive past those
    Stuck on the corner, shovelling rock and mortar
    Door porters, floor sweepers and out of work authors
    Street poets with no money to pay for university courses
    Migos looking like little Richard, makes me Richard prior
    How you go from rapping about Versace to pushing China?
    You laugh at my honda, but your zonda got the Feds watching
    You better be fresh as hell cause two chains will have your legs bucklin
    Chi raq got more lils than a fucking bow wow show
    Ya'll should drop the adjective like bullock with the f bomb faux
    There's nothing scarier than a five foot five dude
    Swaggering up to you with a high voice and white shoes
    with the height of church pews like you're the one getting screwed
    imbued with the courage of one too many brews
    Respect that, but rhyming pit with shit then shit with bitch then shit with shit?
    That's a juvenile flow and I'm not talking picture perfect
    Shit, let me get back on track, I'm rap geniusing these cats
    It's making me laugh that they actually pen this trash
    And people sit there and interpret things like
    All this money in the world I gotta have it
    I ain't trickin on a bitch that's a bad habit
    You'd need a college degree just to have a crack at it
    I feel responsibility, collegially pragmatic
    I was there when Wayne stuck a shoehorn in a vagina
    When ja rule was hitting pussy I was still a minor
    And I copped every one of Wayne's albums like guzzling valiums
    So I don't mind the odd alien on fallon
    i payed full price on itunes for i'm gay
    and i'd cop it on vinyl, he'll be idolised before he's paid
    with a fenubulum street sweeper fake snacks will get slayed
    stop dropping raps about latent gats you haven't even laid
    eyes on
    rap beef has turned softer than puff
    you slow cooked the game and i wont fall for your bluff
    Big l is in hell watching you fail
    Big pun is shocked stunned listening to females
    Tupac disowned rap confronted by your verses
    Notorious is furious when you rhyme curses with curses
    or unspeakable with unspeakable
    if jays the president, he's impeachable
    he needs to come harder than the magna carta
    he was the rock of gibralta and now he falters
    but it isnt his responsibility to breath life in to futility
    its the young crew who's been rendered chopped and screwed
    and until they kick the juice theyll keep spitting spew
    fuck the mixtape game
    every cat apart from cassidy is lame
    with 3 legs ill have to take you out the back and end your game
    but only on wax
    im just disappointed in rap
    as a fan i cant hack whats become of our artistic map

  • #2
    "I was there when Wayne stuck a shoehorn in a vagina"

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    • #3
      Lyrics are on point. I think a lil work is need on your mic presence other than that its #A1 4/5
      https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Laudacity93 View Post
        Lyrics are on point. I think a lil work is need on your mic presence other than that its #A1 4/5
        Thanks bro. I can't rap. It sucks. I wish I could

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        • #5
          These lyrics are fairly solid, it just you need to recite them over and over and over and work on your flow. Plus the mixing could use some help. The beat sounds fine, its just your vocals sound in a hole and not crisp. Adjust. Watch some youtube videos on mastering, and come back more aggressive. good job though.

          Mykill's Verdict: 3.4/5

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          • #6
            Originally posted by mykill View Post
            These lyrics are fairly solid, it just you need to recite them over and over and over and work on your flow. Plus the mixing could use some help. The beat sounds fine, its just your vocals sound in a hole and not crisp. Adjust. Watch some youtube videos on mastering, and come back more aggressive. good job though.

            Mykill's Verdict: 3.4/5
            I think I need a proper mic.. Is there any way for me to sort the mix out via audacity? Or is it purely a microhpone quality issue?

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