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    Over the top of [MENTION=66413]Flame Beats[/MENTION] Fuck Em

    this one is for the fans
    the real hip hop stans who can list all members of the wu-tang clan
    who can ride out to a Big L verse
    and spit every single line that they didnt rehearse
    salute to all the G's and not just the stars
    to every white boy cranking Prem in their car
    with the windows rolled up so you don't get sparred
    with an L rolled up beneath your jeans for the art
    Rocking S dots order that shit from afar
    You're in South Africar or in the Asian bazaars
    thirteens on the car and smoke thick nicki minaj
    Who's favourite member was Pras, he had bars!
    you rode out with Papoose
    Flowed out with Nice and Smooth
    Pharcyde aint passin by
    Outkast on Idelwild
    All the ones you idolise
    from EL-P to Mastermind
    from Masta Ace to J-Live
    Crooked I to the King TI
    The slaughterhouse bringing the mortar out
    dropping bombs in large amounts
    even suits with the Minaj accounts
    taking chances on Minaj's pout
    we're all devout, we're all disciples
    foot soldiers toting finger rifles
    blog fiends and twitter trojans
    purchase with one eye on mouths open
    yet before a word was spoken you honed in
    itunes opened and you bought the whole thing
    pre-order that classic you gotta have it
    just our contribution to the mathematics.
    first week numbers mean nothing to the addicts
    the first and the fifteenth our crack is
    vinyl, it means more to me than Lionel on a sunday
    We only know one way
    And no I am not speaking about Gunplay
    Though Maybachs have only entered vernacular
    since Rick Ross switched from CO to spectacular
    but fuck the facts i'm not 2pacular
    I won't bite the bloods and the Crips can still snack on ya
    I'm side tracked and the fact is no amount of black friends could save iggy from the rap fiends
    she's a faker
    and the true heads knows she's only down cause she's sucks like a laser
    get it? I mean nothing will phase her
    give her a razor she'd choke on the blades, ha!
    give me a chance and I'd Bouillabaisse her
    she can stew on just why the real fans hate her
    but the truth is she presents more danger than when Mase found his saviour
    and disowned us
    Oh man where the fuck is this going, fuck
    I just zoned out man that's my proneness
    And now I'm done, I've lost my boner
    call me a rap stoner
    cause i blaze with flame beats on the corner
    my room is transformed to concrete under soldiers
    the carpet stained with sodium carbonate
    as i spit and inflict my will on the paved
    tongue to the hilt in sputum, extravasate
    can't even see my screen it's been caked
    cached in the rhymes I've spate disregarding all taste
    whether or not you can stomach my mace
    is whether or not you can stomach the pace of the way I lace each word with wisdom from the everyday of this race I constantly push my fault brakes to the limit i cannot abate so until your due date keep chowing from my food plate
    Yeah the hate
    it's hard to overpower it
    it's hard not to cower in the flowers when
    I see you, spy you, comparing me to your idols
    my only rival is my blinkered eyes though
    so I'll sidle
    along for the ride and live the culture
    I'm whiter than Katy Perry I hope that doesnt revolt ya
    Ultra magnetic funka ya head up i'll coach ya

    Freestyled it. Not off the top of the dome, I wish!

  • #2
    not bad bruh
    lyrics and flow were cool
    i think the beat was too low though

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    • #3
      Your lyrics and flow are great, it just sounded like you were talking instead of spitting bro

      It's Tunechi Homie, Master Of Ceremonies.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by LilTunƎchi View Post
        Your lyrics and flow are great, it just sounded like you were talking instead of spitting bro
        How do I change that?

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Theonlydjorkaeff View Post
          How do I change that?
          Just higher your voice, speed up your flow a lil bit and put more energy in it

          It's Tunechi Homie, Master Of Ceremonies.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by LilTunƎchi View Post
            Just higher your voice, speed up your flow a lil bit and put more energy in it
            Ok thanks man! I'm working on something else ATM I'll try to spit instead of talk

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Theonlydjorkaeff View Post
              Ok thanks man! I'm working on something else ATM I'll try to spit instead of talk
              Good luck killin it brudda

              It's Tunechi Homie, Master Of Ceremonies.

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              • #8
                not to sure about this, the beat is epic but you sound laidback and it comes across quite monotone, dont get me wrong lyrically its not to bad at all, sounds more like a freestyle to me though. not bad though dont get me wrong i like the direction of it , just needs to sound more aggressive to me 3.5/5


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                • #9
                  Yeah, this isn't bad lyrically. not at all, though, the subject matter is eh to me. You gotta work on that flow and delivery. You got the ability to switch it up, but you got off beat and your delivery is pretty monotone. When you rap, just keep reciting and reciting it. Keep reciting it til you get it memorized and you'll notice your flow and delivery getting better and better.


                  You should be ashamed if you're following me on twitter and retweeting a nigga.

                  You should be ashamed if you're not reblogging my posts on tumblr

                  You should be ashamed if you're not subscribed to my youtube

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by LilTunƎchi View Post
                    Your lyrics and flow are great, it just sounded like you were talking instead of spitting bro
                    like curren$y?
                    .................... ....................

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                    • #11
                      Lyrically this is good but the mic presence needs a lil work. Don't hesitate to show emotion when you rap bro keep it up!
                      https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                        not to sure about this, the beat is epic but you sound laidback and it comes across quite monotone, dont get me wrong lyrically its not to bad at all, sounds more like a freestyle to me though. not bad though dont get me wrong i like the direction of it , just needs to sound more aggressive to me 3.5/5
                        Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
                        Yeah, this isn't bad lyrically. not at all, though, the subject matter is eh to me. You gotta work on that flow and delivery. You got the ability to switch it up, but you got off beat and your delivery is pretty monotone. When you rap, just keep reciting and reciting it. Keep reciting it til you get it memorized and you'll notice your flow and delivery getting better and better.
                        Originally posted by Flame Beats View Post
                        like curren$y?
                        Originally posted by Laudacity93 View Post
                        Lyrically this is good but the mic presence needs a lil work. Don't hesitate to show emotion when you rap bro keep it up!
                        fuck you guys are all so nice, i thought i'd get FLAMED (no pun intended) for posting this up.

                        Thanks guys. I'm gonna work on my mic presence. Maybe rap a bit higher, really throw myself in to it. I dunno. I wish I could rap. It's fun!

                        thanks guys

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