My Story

[LilTunƎchi]

Lyrics:-

[Verse 1]

no one sees the things that i see with my eyes
i know the reason for all of my cries
im looking for the truth, lost in the lies
go and spread your wings, word to the wise
all i wanna do is just reach my success
though it's kinda hard i'd have to confess
i'm young black and talented, can't forget i'm blessed
i'm going through this life and i'm coping with the stress
and this is for the ones who have given up on life
i'ma help you spread your wings so take my advice
when the world gets cold don't slip up on the ice
i'm bout to take ya to the warmer place, paradise


[Verse 2]

woke up this morning feeling down as fuck
my girl ain't around, i'm out of bucks
i called up my friends, asking for help
they just walked away, and wished me luck
what's funny is when they needed a hand
i tried to help them the best i can
what goes around, comes around
i helped them all, but they let me down
i told my self, they will understand
i talked to them, they didn't make a sound
i'm out of sight, out of mind
out of time, to decide
should i run? should i hide?
for the rest, of my life
what is my fate? what is my future?
what is my goal? what do i stand for?
but fuck this shit, i cried enough
i'll make it on my own, i don't need the love
i came out my room, faked a smile
i hope this strength, will last a while
Damn..


[Outro]

Yeah, for all my brothers and sisters out there
I know i know, life is hard
It can leave you, physically
mentally, and emotionally, scarred
but every struggle in your life
has shaped you into the person you are today
be thankful for the hard times
they can only make you stronger
a wise man said
you never know how strong you are
unless strong is the only choice you have
and remember
never let anyone judge the life you live
you are not perfect and you don't have to be
so tell them before they start pointing fingers
to make sure their hands are clean
ya feel me?
Be different, different is beautiful
and just, just keep smiling
no matter what

[Lil wayne prezident]

not bad, emotional song, good choice of beat.

[Tune Up]

Cool story bro

[YMCMB357]

I see you posted it in Tha Studio section

[Mutti Wayne]

Good job bro lyrics on point!

[LilTunƎchi]

I see you posted it in Tha Studio section

Lol

Good job bro lyrics on point!

Thx brother

[mykill]

Flow is awkward. Maybe practice the verse a few times to the beat before recording. I can tell you have an accent, so that might be the barrier for you to get things out smoothly. Lyrics are good, but kind of elementary. Once you get a good flow and mic presence going, try working on improving your lyrics - adding wordplay, better punches, multies, etc. Emotional/Personal songs always bring the best out of artists, because it forces them put something out that has a bit of "them" mixed into. It gets them to take more time with the track and really craft something special. Good job.

Mykill's Verdict: 3/5

Sidenote: Welcome to posting in Tha Studio. Don't forget to read the posting rules: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...6-19-11-a.html

[Laudacity93]

Repetition is the father of learning. Keep rehearsing the verses before you lay them down. The strory is good but I wasn't really diggin the beat selection. keep grinding tho 3/5

[SupraTyson]

love the accent bro! the only thing i got to criticise is maybe add a bit more of emotion into how you deliver your vocals. You have good and meaningful lyrics, make it sound like that!