Devil's Child - Ice Explicit

[SupraTyson]

Just a new song i produced, please give me feedback i would highly appreciate it!



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[Laudacity93]

Lyrics are good but the flow is a bit choppy. mixing is A1 tho. Keep grinding bro 3.8/5

[mykill]

This wasnt bad.... I just feel like some parts you kind of rush yourself and it's hard to really understand what you're saying. Maybe take some more time with tracks in the future and ensure that your vocals are clear and that your message is clear with it. Quick, to the point, and concise - which is good. Keep at it.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[Artille]

This is my first time hearing your work. It wasn't terrible, but your flow/energy could use some work. It was a bit boring to me and the disses were pretty weak if we're being real. The mixing sounds good other than a few times where the end of a bar couldn't be heard clearly. That might just be due to the flow though. I look forward to hearing more work from you in the future.

2/5