J.A.I - Around The World (feat. Creature)

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Hey yall,

got some new heat or yall, this is a song just for the clubs pretty much. Its currently gettin some local buzz here so i wanted to see what yall think. The first verse is me, second verse is my Label Mate Creature.

Also, the record label im part of just opened their website, Check it out!
psychozonthestreet.thepro.dj

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1291495


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1289737

[mykill]

*WARNING: That feedback is soooo old. You gotta do feedback that's within a week of your post so it counts. Remember dat.

Anyways, song isnt that bad. Decent beat and concept. I think your verse needs some more polish, lyric wise. Mixing on it is kinda wonky. I can hear some wind and motion that the mic picked up. Autotune and delay is mixed well though. Labelmate's vocals are iffy too. I think you guys might need a better mic. Notice that Creature had a little bit of a slip up on the 2nd half of his verse. He lost the beat for some reason.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[elow252]

This has potential to be something you'd hear on the radio, for real. Go to a studio with this song and it could turn out good as fuck.