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    Don't Laugh
    Produced by Baghira
    Mixed by me

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  • #2
    4/5 cause the quality I like the lyrics & vibe alot of dem lines connected on ah personal level #triplesalute

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Checkmatemuzick View Post
      4/5 cause the quality I like the lyrics & vibe alot of dem lines connected on ah personal level #triplesalute
      Thank you! Can you tell me what it is about the mixing that needs adjusting?

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      • #4
        Bumpski

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        • #5
          pretty dope overall...flow stayed smooth throughout and u had a good mix of personal lyrics and punchlines...i would turn the vocals down a bit though
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          • #6
            Realest lyrics... Smooth flow... Good multies... Great music...

            I like this beat. You rode it pretty well. Always A+ work from Artille. Mixing was on point too, but I feel this could go a little further if it had more adlibs and vocal modulation. Just some effects here and there, nothing too crazy. Like if there was some delay echo on words here and there, maybe a little stereo adlib here and there. Great job none the less. When's the tape come out?

            Mykill's Verdict: 4.6/5

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            • #7
              I laughed



              for real tho, this is really dope....amazing quality
              Originally posted by Shake
              Why so negative all the time???

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              • #8
                Hey man you have good ass delivery! The beat and lyrics are full of soul, good job bro!
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                • #9
                  either the mix isnt perfect or you rapped a bit quietly.

                  but the lyrics are dope af and i like your flow.

                  would be a 5/5 if u rapped it with more emotions, hope you get what im sayin

                  would give a 4/5

                  oh and the beat fits perfect btw

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                  • #10
                    I've always thought you were dope. This is another dope song from you. The lyrically content fit perfect and the flow is awesome as well. Vocals may be a little loud but i guess it depends on what you are listening on, i listened thru my laptop speakers so i don't really wanna judge the mixing that much cuz my speakers are booty lol. Overall A- .. Pretty dope!

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                    • #11
                      Add more emotion in the delivery and it'll be a masterpiece 4.6/5
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                      • #12
                        Homie, shit sounds really nice. Beat is outstanding, your flow is good, but ur voice sounds held back. Work on delivery bruh
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