Anthony October - Headlock

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

Check out my newest music video "Headlock", a song that i hope makes my first studio album (its up to my company).

The song talks about how kids nowadays shouldnt distract themselves with gangsta morals and should go out there and go get a teacher ya know? be a real dog of good pedigree.

I have an unusual style but i promise, just look for the good in the song and you will see how dope it is,I will be posting new songs eventually, March and April are gonna be my grindin months this spring.

Criticism appreciated.

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1475862

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1475861

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The hook fooled me into thinking this was a good song -_-I was just sitting back here like, bring that nigga from the hook back


lol like for real lol know what I'm saying lol? lol haha but na I'm playing lmao but


forreal tho lol lyrically that was nice. and Idk, maybe you made it like that to sound like that on purpose to fool the audience into thinking this was going to be a different song and then once their attention peaked, you switched up on them. but you didn't come across quite as tho-rough out-edly as you should've

Idk

I was feeling it until the verse started, and what you was saying, but not how you said it in structure or sonic-vitality, but the hook was BOSS, I have no idea why you switched from that pitch, all you had to do was make the tempo lower in spots while you rap from where it originally was, you should not have changed from the sound the song started out with,

like I said I don't know

[Artille]

Instrumental is chill, but the video was kinda off (referring to you jumping around during the hook) and pretty boring/pointless. The mixing is really weird. Your flow has potential, but the autotune ruins it. Luckily, your lyrics have meaning. However, it's rather short, another verse would've made it more complete.

2/5