Here is an unmastered demo for my album due out 12-25-16. Let me know of what you think of my flow. https://soundcloud.com/user-77182167...ime-thang-demo
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Even though you redid it the vocals need to really stand out. The beat is nice. Catchy as hell. You may need to turn down the beat as a whole. the second version is definitely better than the first. Where did you learn how to master? Are you doing everything yourself?
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it has alot of potential but it needs to be produced better i self taught myself to produce and now i have people producing for me. check out my music at www.soundcloud.com/projectillogic keep on chasing the dream you have talent peaceim schizophrenic
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Originally posted by Mrwetface View PostEven though you redid it the vocals need to really stand out. The beat is nice. Catchy as hell. You may need to turn down the beat as a whole. the second version is definitely better than the first. Where did you learn how to master? Are you doing everything yourself?Originally posted by projectillogic View Postit has alot of potential but it needs to be produced better i self taught myself to produce and now i have people producing for me. check out my music at www.soundcloud.com/projectillogic keep on chasing the dream you have talent peace
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Definetely work on mixing your music better. The songs have decent concepts, the execution could use some work though. I listened to a little bit of your EP on BandCamp, as well. If you produce your beats, keep up the work. As for the vocals, if you really want them to shine, I'd suggest hitting up your local studio and they'll make 'em pop for you. Good luck!
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Originally posted by RIOT View PostDefinetely work on mixing your music better. The songs have decent concepts, the execution could use some work though. I listened to a little bit of your EP on BandCamp, as well. If you produce your beats, keep up the work. As for the vocals, if you really want them to shine, I'd suggest hitting up your local studio and they'll make 'em pop for you. Good luck!
https://rasnosallunderjah.bandcamp.c.../addict-import
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Beat is... hmm... Couldnt really tell what you were saying in some of it because the vocals were still kind of low and unclear, but a solid effort none the less.
Mykill's Verdict: B-
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