Off the Dome-Contest

[ATLien666]

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So, you know it's the one and only/
No competition, damn, I'm feelin' lonely/
You got casted down, Hollywood homely/
Step to this, and get eradicated in seconds/
Go through the first 20 pages, leave these 5 for seconds/
Feed me rappers or feed me beats/
I got victory locked up, and freed defeat/
This straight off the dome, the youngin' should be restin' for school/
Put I can skip for a funeral, so I'll just bury you two/
Cool and reckless, only because I'm undefeated/
Life is a rough bitch, but I charm it when I see it/
Seein' what I'm ridin' in, in your eyes you wanna key it/
You gonna see a red friday, no Pink, you ain't gonna Keys it/

Ehh, so-so for a lil' freestyle at 1 am.

[FuckTheFeds]

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.5/5 didnt flow at all..

[-Nino-]

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how is this off the dome....your typing it..Lmao. Bet half this shit is other people lyrics.

[FuckTheFeds]

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i got her on them beans,
grindin on the teeth, time to eat,
rollin up this road, drivin in the mode,
lookin both ways, is this a video game,
i shouldnt of played, still the same,
never change, get high all day,
ok what can i say, im always this way,
drugs are the same, but who can i trust,
ive had to much, or havent had enough,
i need a love, not a dub,
im above, this here drug,

[ATLien666]

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.5/5 didnt flow at all..

Lol, seriously?

[FuckTheFeds]

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ya..i could of lied

[lunatick90]

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Off the dome I drop lyrical bombs like its Hiroshima
It feel good to wake up, bake up n cop a brand new Beemer
Thats the lifestyle I live n dont ever get it twisted
Stay sellin drugs, hit niggaz with slugs but neva been arrested
Murder fake thugs, fuck thick bitches n alwayz got on a mean mug
Cross paths with me n there bound to be alot of blood but i dont gang bang
When u C me either get outta the way or get ready for a fukkin hurricane!

Holla Back

[ATLien666]

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ya..i could of lied

You already did, brah, lol.

[FuckTheFeds]

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if u think so.

tell me what u think,
pockets on robbin banks,
took it out the safe,
breathe for god sake,
live before god take,
make before others break,
steak up on the trays,
just another day,
i just try to pray,
until i go away,
it wont be ok,
i know i cant change.
finish writin what i say,

[lunatick90]

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if u think so.

tell me what u think,
pockets on robbin banks,
took it out the safe,
breathe for god sake,
live before god take,
make before others break,
steak up on the trays,
just another day,
i just try to pray,
until i go away,
it wont be ok,
i know i cant change.
finish writin what i say,

2.5/5

mannnnn those nursery rhymes are not ahead of the times
you aint talkin bout shit around here you gon get your dome split
you think what you write is legit but ill murder you in every possible way
how u like it should i shoot up and spray from a block away
or spin you around up close from the AK...

owwwwwww

this is fun!

[FuckTheFeds]

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ok, a-k this guy is a l-a-m-e
im showin him these rymes, after i get done eatin ur mom alive.
drive by pull ups on every other day, bitch i got a menu and i aint even gotta pay,
locked with them things, i make my own change, turn ur life into a grave,
stay the same, i run threw lames, drivin in my lane, tryin to make my name,
look at how i came, nothin went to fame, now look what i have made,
still i say, fuck lunatick90,tunafish pus-sy, u in the can,
damn, fuck u though,i let it go,on this track, u aint close,
my messages floats, urs does what, anchor fuck,
bitch whats up, i got bucks, u got noth,damn that sucks
so does ur love, had her in the truck,she made me bust my nut,
let me put it in the butt, so i put it in the butt,she cant get enough.
tick ur girls in love, i fucked her to much, u can have her back,
u and here are both wack, so i crack, trigger finger itchin,
bringin in that wayne, u suck so stop playin this game,
ill come on here and murder u again, thats another win,
after this one i think i fuckin win, im at finish u at the begining,
so trust my dog, dont write back, i might embrass u on another track,

[lunatick90]

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ok, a-k this guy is a l-a-m-e
im showin him these rymes, after i get done eatin ur mom alive.
drive by pull ups on every other day, bitch i got a menu and i aint even gotta pay,
locked with them things, i make my own change, turn ur life into a grave,
stay the same, i run threw lames, drivin in my lane, tryin to make my name,
look at how i came, nothin went to fame, now look what i have made,
still i say, fuck lunatick90,tunafish pus-sy, u in the can,
damn, fuck u though,i let it go,on this track, u aint close,
my messages floats, urs does what, anchor fuck,
bitch whats up, i got bucks, u got noth,damn that sucks
so does ur love, had her in the truck,she made me bust my nut,
let me put it in the butt, so i put it in the butt,she cant get enough.
tick ur girls in love, i fucked her to much, u can have her back,
u and here are both wack, so i crack, trigger finger itchin,
bringin in that wayne, u suck so stop playin this game,
ill come on here and murder u again, thats another win,
after this one i think i fuckin win, im at finish u at the begining,
so trust my dog, dont write back, i might embrass u on another track,

3.5/5

After the first few lines it was kind of hard to follow, your typing nonsense
I think you need a bigger cock to swallow, your whole style is whack
Your flow is shallow, dont step to me kid i cause aint afraid to hit ur temple
crack your skull, dislocate your elbow and make your mother blow
on my shit like she a pro but thats for tonight, let her know ill holla
tell her i dont accept loose change and i charge by the dollar
and if you try to get in the way ill grab you by the fukin collar
show you how we run up on bitches in Jersey cause we dont play
its either you respect my flow or next day be found torn to pieces on the highway