Off the Dome-Contest

[JrockHQ]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

That shit is old, but i don't really care, i was just trying keep everyone here from fighting, but lol i guess i forgot everyone trys to get someone on here.. lmao, and it don't matter to me, typing a freestyle doesnt even make sense to me? a free is off the spot everyone can stop, and think what to write so therefore trying to say you're freestyling by typing is fake. lmao.

I was thinking the same thing.... but I'm gonna write something down anyways.... <3 Artille...

I appreciate all of you that left feedback
So I had to get on and write another track
In this one, nobody will be dissed
After I write this the arguments will be sist
If you didn't know, that means stopped
Don't fuck with me homie, cause you'll get dropped
I ain't a gangsta, so you won't get popped
But when it comes to rappin', you will get dropped
Yeah, I'm from the dirty like dishes in a sink
Smoke good weed, got my eyes slanted like a chink
Your girl looked at me and couldn't even blink
I made that hoe cum, and all I did was wink
God damn, Artille goin' ham
I'll slit your throat and chop your body up like a lamb
But right before I kill you, I say "don't worry about your fam"
Cuz Ima kill them to
Don't worry boy, they'll soon be with you
I don't know where to end, so Ima just keep goin
Bitch I'll never quit, my towels never been thrown
Shout out to the admin Danny M
Fuck them haters, don't worry about them
Just keep on posting all that new Wayne
Its all about the HQ fuck New-Lil-Wayne
Let me end this before you have to scroll down the page
I'm the best rapper, and the world is my stage

I'm finished. Feedback?

It was dope until you said fuck the new lil wayne
besides that it was beast,
sounded like a story when i was reading it. but yeah fuck the HQ haters. wheres your boy steezy?
I wonder who's the next racist victim gonna be.

My bad I didn't mean fuck "the" new Lil Wayne. I was referring to the site. New Lil Wayne Dot Com. It Doesn't let me put that though, it replaces it.

Haha yeah i was thinking and realize that i edited my post right before you replyed
came to the conclusion trillphill is this lonely boy that has nothing to do with life therefor talks dumb shit on the internet

[ItsYNR]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Trill wanna say my shit is from the past,
See the funny thing that makes me laugh..
Is my old shit is still kicking HQ&#39;s ass..
And i like how skim put me on blast..
Throwing it up because Jrock had asked..
You had to buy you&#39;re respect i earn cloud..
I spit so much flame, i got a sun-burn mouth..
And now i got you quiet like a church mouse..
You softer then them titties under you&#39;re girls blouse..

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Lol, YNR's post is from I think one of Patriarch's contests.

LOL, you are right. This is supposed to be off the dome...

Source? and if so who the hell cares? it's still a hot verse regardless. MizzDrizzy just spent 30 something mins writing a diss reply to me claiming it was off the dome but it really wasn't. so why aren't you putting drizzy on the spot? dickriding

Who???And I Aint Take 30 Mins To Write I just Posted My Message 30 Mins After You Posted Yours....I Could Have Read Yo Shit At Any Time I Aint Read As Soon As You Posted It Dumbass

[Artille]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Trill wanna say my shit is from the past,
See the funny thing that makes me laugh..
Is my old shit is still kicking HQ&#39;s ass..
And i like how skim put me on blast..
Throwing it up because Jrock had asked..
You had to buy you&#39;re respect i earn cloud..
I spit so much flame, i got a sun-burn mouth..
And now i got you quiet like a church mouse..
You softer then them titties under you&#39;re girls blouse..

lol that was hot, when I get a mic I wanna colab...

I'm gonna just say fuck trillphill
That faggot can't fuck with Artille
Kill yourself, die, pop a pill
This boy sick of me, cause my rhymes are ill
Yeah, bitch my rhymes are just sick
All you racist fucks on JRock's dick
You stay on his dick, and swallow the discharge
HQ is full of racists at large
I bet my rhymes make your balls blue, like the hair on Marge
Trill and steezy better recognize who's in charge
He ain't even a Mexican, but you call him Pablo
Do like wayne said "Shut up bitch swallow!!!"

The End

[IAmJay]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Trill wanna say my shit is from the past,
See the funny thing that makes me laugh..
Is my old shit is still kicking HQ&#39;s ass..
And i like how skim put me on blast..
Throwing it up because Jrock had asked..
You had to buy you&#39;re respect i earn cloud..
I spit so much flame, i got a sun-burn mouth..
And now i got you quiet like a church mouse..
You softer then them titties under you&#39;re girls blouse..

lol that was hot, when I get a mic I wanna colab...

I'm gonna just say fuck trillphill
That faggot can't fuck with Artille
Kill yourself, die, pop a pill
This boy sick of me, cause my rhymes are ill
Yeah, bitch my rhymes are just sick
All you racist fucks on JRock's dick
You stay on his dick, and swallow the discharge
HQ is full of racists at large
I bet my rhymes make your balls blue, like the hair on Marge
Trill and steezy better recognize who's in charge
He ain't even a Mexican, but you call him Pablo
Do like wayne said "Shut up bitch swallow!!!"

The End

Nice shit Artille.

[Artille]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Nice shit Artille.

Thanks, hopefully that will end some of the racism being done in this forum. Probably not, but we can only hope.

[IAmJay]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Nice shit Artille.

Thanks, hopefully that will end some of the racism being done in this forum. Probably not, but we can only hope.

Hopefully but I don't think it will. They just gonna keep coming back.

[Artille]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

[quote=Lil' Jay]

Nice shit Artille.

Thanks, hopefully that will end some of the racism being done in this forum. Probably not, but we can only hope.

Hopefully but I don't think it will. They just gonna keep coming back.[/quote:31satnir]
And I'm gonna keep delivering fire lyrics toward their asses. Before I joined this site I thought I was mediocre. I only had two raps memorized (not written). Ever since I got on here I have had a lot more to talk about. Although, when I don't write I have a lot more punchlines and metaphors

[JrockHQ]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

My material is so outta this world they say i steal
i got robots from mars rapping to my shit saying it's ill
im dancing with the devil, only b/c my bars are made out of hot stile
watch the lyrical sniper, it's deadly and I'm aim to kill
trillphill wanna talk shit and bring me down
im lifting HQ back up with my feet on the ground
it's time for a new movement and different approach
thats why im copping rebirth December 21st
no later or ur catch a ride with 50 cent in a flopped hearse
Some may call me rock b/c my words are powerful and off the top
others call me j b/c i stay blazed in my own world ready to amaze
but those who call me cock are haters and only here to jock

[IAmJay]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

[quote=Artille]

Nice shit Artille.

Thanks, hopefully that will end some of the racism being done in this forum. Probably not, but we can only hope.

Hopefully but I don't think it will. They just gonna keep coming back.

And I'm gonna keep delivering fire lyrics toward their asses. Before I joined this site I thought I was mediocre. I only had two raps memorized (not written). Ever since I got on here I have had a lot more to talk about. Although, when I don't write I have a lot more punchlines and metaphors[/quote:13e12xlm]

Ha yeah I feel you. Fuck them tho, they're racist pieces of shit. And when I first joined this site it was cool until now.

[ItsYNR]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Trill wanna say my shit is from the past,
See the funny thing that makes me laugh..
Is my old shit is still kicking HQ&#39;s ass..
And i like how skim put me on blast..
Throwing it up because Jrock had asked..
You had to buy you&#39;re respect i earn cloud..
I spit so much flame, i got a sun-burn mouth..
And now i got you quiet like a church mouse..
You softer then them titties under you&#39;re girls blouse..

lol that was hot, when I get a mic I wanna colab...

I'm gonna just say fuck trillphill
That faggot can't fuck with Artille
Kill yourself, die, pop a pill
This boy sick of me, cause my rhymes are ill
Yeah, bitch my rhymes are just sick
All you racist fucks on JRock's dick
You stay on his dick, and swallow the discharge
HQ is full of racists at large
I bet my rhymes make your balls blue, like the hair on Marge
Trill and steezy better recognize who's in charge
He ain't even a Mexican, but you call him Pablo
Do like wayne said "Shut up bitch swallow!!!"

The End

He said the end, but i'll just begin.. wait dont count that as a bar, check this

Last week they had to put a dude in a coffen,
He took more shots then the 91' jordan..
Twin glock's call em mary-kate and ashley olsen..
Heard his heart beating threw his shirt i had to pause it. WHAT!

[JrockHQ]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

My material is so outta this world they say i steal
i got robots from mars rapping to my shit saying it's ill
im dancing with the devil, only b/c my bars are made out of hot stile
watch the lyrical sniper, it's deadly and I'm aim to kill
trillphill wanna talk shit and bring me down
im lifting HQ back up with my feet on the ground
it's time for a new movement and different approach
thats why im copping rebirth December 21st
no later or ur catch a ride with 50 cent in a flopped hearse
Some may call me rock b/c my words are powerful and off the top
others call me j b/c i stay blazed in my own world ready to amaze
but those who call me cock are haters and only here to jock

Any feedback would be appreciated.