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  • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

    Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh


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    • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

      Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
      Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh
      i know i'm going off topic. but you just made yourself look hypocritically. you cant tell ppl that they are going off topic and then then go off topic yourself.
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      • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

        Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
        Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh
        You're off topic in saying that

        But to stay on topic:

        Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
        Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
        Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
        It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
        Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
        I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
        I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
        But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
        J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
        So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
        She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
        Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
        Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
        Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
        J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
        Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.

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        • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

          Originally posted by snowman99
          Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
          Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh
          i know i'm going off topic. but you just made yourself look hypocritically. you cant tell ppl that they are going off topic and then then go off topic yourself.
          Since we gettin all off topic, I guess Im fenna drop it
          To Pablo, stick to painting, All this hatin...Gotta stop it!
          Why u steady arguin, This a battle nigga
          People on ya jock got ya head growin bigga
          Well Im not a fan not a groupie not a hoe
          But Im goin, goin in and I think that you should know
          Leave the bickerin at home, Criticize me, Push your luck
          Lemme hear ya feedback, Psych! I dont give a fuck!

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          • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

            u see i ball while u stall, get it pushed cause u fall,
            me on the other hand, i stand, all cause i can,
            im my streets im the man, thats got the land,
            i like my women tan, not to black just act like a vack,
            dont stop till it stacks, on ur face im nasty and ur mother would say u were a discrace,
            my daughter did what to ur dick, she just sucked it u want a ticket.
            a milf and a daugher get her to lick her momma,
            while i fuck her from behind and she hollers,
            dont stop why bother,id rather get better,
            and shed rather get wetter, no matter what weather,
            she just wants me to let her, do what she wants got no problem listening to ur thoughts,
            im spittin benjamins, and u spittin washinton

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            • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

              Originally posted by bliss47
              Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
              Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh
              You're off topic in saying that

              But to stay on topic:

              Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
              Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
              Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
              It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
              Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
              I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
              I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
              But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
              J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
              So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
              She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
              Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
              Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
              Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
              J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
              Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.


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              • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                [quote=Lyrical JRock]
                Originally posted by bliss47
                Originally posted by "Lyrical JRock":173h7iww
                Why does every thread in tha studio alway go off topic? this is a freestyle thread not no general chat thread. smfh
                You're off topic in saying that

                But to stay on topic:

                Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
                Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
                Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
                It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
                Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
                I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
                I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
                But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
                J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
                So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
                She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
                Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
                Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
                Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
                J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
                Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
                I'm a critical thinker, monumental speaker
                blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
                hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
                i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
                you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
                i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
                i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
                my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
                im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
                i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
                fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
                the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
                squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
                an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
                to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.[/quote:173h7iww]

                Sitting in the trap house, with the guns out,
                With the gats out, I’mma blast out,
                I‘m not playing no joke, I’mma let my gat blow,
                I’mma blast now, I’mma blast slow, get low,
                Huh, now do you really wanna mess with a .44,
                Leave your guts sprawled out on my kitchen floor,
                Yeah I let the trigger go as soon as you step through the door,
                Already in your house got your woman locked in the store,
                Keep her gag and binded in the cellar, that’s better,
                Tears running down her face make her get a little wetter,
                Yeah now you mother fuckers know what I’m about,
                Put the gun to your temple, tease you, let you scream and shout,
                But the only noise that’ll be heard is that of my chamber,
                As a blow a hole in your face re-arrange ya,
                Huh really think I’m that sadistic,
                You best believe it bitch, don’t get it twisted,
                Do you like a pancake and mother fucker I flip it,
                I can spit sentimental or I can spit some sick shit,
                I’m the new slim shady, I’m white and I’m still crazy,
                And I don’t need valium to make me this way that’s lazy,
                And when you sneeze it's bless, not bliss,
                I don't even consider half of what you put a diss,
                Little prick, suck a dick, you's a bitch,
                I'm the big shit, you nothing but a tad bit.

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                • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                  bliss47, dude you suck, i murked you with a simple 16 bar.
                  it took you 3-24bars to get your point across but you still sounded like a rookie

                  anyone who like judging, pick his best verse, and compare it to my one verse. and give feedback.

                  and no im not talking to one of his dickriders that will automatically pick him regardless.


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                  • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                    Don't really know, ya'll both went hard as hell.
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                    • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                      Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
                      bliss47, dude you suck, i murked you with a simple 16 bar.
                      it took you 3-24bars to get your point across but you still sounded like a rookie

                      anyone who like judging, pick his best verse, and compare it to my one verse. and give feedback.

                      and no im not talking to one of his dickriders that will automatically pick him regardless.
                      Murked me...right lets go over your 16 then:
                      i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips - You are aware ammonium is a liquid so you're gonna super soaker me??
                      i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse - How's a solar eclipse crisp??
                      i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit - Bless not bliss
                      squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals - You came on male-like genitals, so you just admitted your gay??

                      On top of those errors you didn't once have anything half offensive towards me where-as I do in both my rhymes, especially my first one. Yet if you say I suck and you murked me with a simple 16 and it took me 3 24's and I still sound like a rookie then how come you can't come back with anything else??

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                      • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                        Originally posted by bliss47
                        Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
                        bliss47, dude you suck, i murked you with a simple 16 bar.
                        it took you 3-24bars to get your point across but you still sounded like a rookie

                        anyone who like judging, pick his best verse, and compare it to my one verse. and give feedback.

                        and no im not talking to one of his dickriders that will automatically pick him regardless.
                        Murked me...right lets go over your 16 then:
                        i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips - You are aware ammonium is a liquid so you're gonna super soaker me??
                        i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse - How's a solar eclipse crisp??
                        i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit - Bless not bliss
                        squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals - You came on male-like genitals, so you just admitted your gay??

                        On top of those errors you didn't once have anything half offensive towards me where-as I do in both my rhymes, especially my first one. Yet if you say I suck and you murked me with a simple 16 and it took me 3 24's and I still sound like a rookie then how come you can't come back with anything else??
                        1.typing error, aluminum was the correct word i was trying to say.
                        2.Crisp means it's cold in the atmosphere during the solar eclipse. so things get harden.
                        3.bliss was directed at your name, they both sound alike so stfu please. you know where i was going with.
                        4. you mess the keyword right? lyrically. male-like still means women, just confusing to tell the differences between'em

                        Mm acutlly i did have multiple things directed at you
                        "you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip"
                        "i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit"
                        "an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
                        to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize"

                        & for the chick who tired to diss me
                        "the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
                        squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals"
                        need i say more

                        You sounded wack, and unprofessional with your lyrics and flow. like that was your first time doing it. therefor i feel i murked you.


                        Y.O.L.O

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                          [quote=Lyrical JRock]
                          Originally posted by bliss47
                          Originally posted by "Lyrical JRock":3pavm1ml
                          bliss47, dude you suck, i murked you with a simple 16 bar.
                          it took you 3-24bars to get your point across but you still sounded like a rookie

                          anyone who like judging, pick his best verse, and compare it to my one verse. and give feedback.

                          and no im not talking to one of his dickriders that will automatically pick him regardless.
                          Murked me...right lets go over your 16 then:
                          i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips - You are aware ammonium is a liquid so you're gonna super soaker me??
                          i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse - How's a solar eclipse crisp??
                          i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit - Bless not bliss
                          squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals - You came on male-like genitals, so you just admitted your gay??

                          On top of those errors you didn't once have anything half offensive towards me where-as I do in both my rhymes, especially my first one. Yet if you say I suck and you murked me with a simple 16 and it took me 3 24's and I still sound like a rookie then how come you can't come back with anything else??
                          1.typing error, aluminum was the correct word i was trying to say.
                          2.Crisp means it's cold in the atmosphere during the solar eclipse. so things get harden.
                          3.bliss was directed at your name, they both sound alike so stfu please. you know where i was going with.
                          4. you mess the keyword right? lyrically. male-like still means women, just confusing to tell the differences between'em

                          Mm acutlly i did have multiple things directed at you
                          "you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip"
                          "i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit"
                          "an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
                          to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize"

                          & for the chick who tired to diss me
                          "the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
                          squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals"
                          need i say more

                          You sounded wack, and unprofessional with your lyrics and flow. like that was your first time doing it. therefor i feel i murked you.[/quote:3pavm1ml]

                          Male-like would mean a woman with male style genitals, so in english a transexual
                          Yeah bliss is my name but when placed into what you said the whole thing doesn't make sense, that's basic right there.
                          But if you can't read it so it all flows then gtfo because it's really not that hard to get. How are my lyrics unprofessional though? Because I actually took very direct shots at you and you didn't like it? Your 16 didn't flow first time I read it but I read it again and made it flow, the way something is seen and read doesn't always mean it doesn't flow, go re-read my shit and make it flow, if you can't go get some English qualifications.

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