Off the Dome-Contest

[JrockHQ]

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Young Fire back at it, i could murk a bitch in any fucking way
I keep the green on me, no Saint Patricks Day
And i keep three hoes with me, thats a hat trick play
My flow is new born and sick, thats what the pediatric say
Killin' rappers with my flow, make them "rappers" vanish
And when i say i stay with a K, i dont mean what in spanish
Thats a shot at the beaners, bitch go make me a taco
We need to CHANGE our country, no barack-O..
'Bama, fuck im tired of the drama
I just wanna smoke a blunt, of the dankest marijuana
Droppin' bombs with my flow, and talk no Osama
Aka SK, And I will split ya crew in half aint talkin' no comma
Flow so sick, bitch where is my vaccine
Ya crew is lame as fuck, i guess you hang with that whack scene
And i stay smokin' on that motherfuckin' crack green
Swagged out bitch, red hat red shirt and smoke black jeans

FADEDDDDDDD

It seems your mind is stunk in slavery times, are your mom or dad racist and your putting up there habits?

"we need to change our country, No barack obama? mexcians should make you some tacos? you only like white chicks?"

[Artille]

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Young Fire back at it, i could murk a bitch in any fucking way
I keep the green on me, no Saint Patricks Day
And i keep three hoes with me, thats a hat trick play
My flow is new born and sick, thats what the pediatric say
Killin' rappers with my flow, make them "rappers" vanish
And when i say i stay with a K, i dont mean what in spanish
Thats a shot at the beaners, bitch go make me a taco
We need to CHANGE our country, no barack-O..
'Bama, fuck im tired of the drama
I just wanna smoke a blunt, of the dankest marijuana
Droppin' bombs with my flow, and talk no Osama
Aka SK, And I will split ya crew in half aint talkin' no comma
Flow so sick, bitch where is my vaccine
Ya crew is lame as fuck, i guess you hang with that whack scene
And i stay smokin' on that motherfuckin' crack green
Swagged out bitch, red hat red shirt and smoke black jeans

FADEDDDDDDD

Keep it up. I liked most of it, accept for the racist bars.

I'm telling you, your lyrics would be so much better if you dropped all of the racism. Not to mention it is ruining your reputation. Right now, to the forums, your reputation is racist.

EDIT: What Yung Fire ment by the Barack Obama line was that the country needs to change. Barack Obama's big word was change. Although that is a very racist statement, it was a clever punchline.

[YoungFire420]

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Young Fire back at it, i could murk a bitch in any fucking way
I keep the green on me, no Saint Patricks Day
And i keep three hoes with me, thats a hat trick play
My flow is new born and sick, thats what the pediatric say
Killin' rappers with my flow, make them "rappers" vanish
And when i say i stay with a K, i dont mean what in spanish
Thats a shot at the beaners, bitch go make me a taco
We need to CHANGE our country, no barack-O..
'Bama, fuck im tired of the drama
I just wanna smoke a blunt, of the dankest marijuana
Droppin' bombs with my flow, and talk no Osama
Aka SK, And I will split ya crew in half aint talkin' no comma
Flow so sick, bitch where is my vaccine
Ya crew is lame as fuck, i guess you hang with that whack scene
And i stay smokin' on that motherfuckin' crack green
Swagged out bitch, red hat red shirt and smoke black jeans

FADEDDDDDDD

Keep it up. I liked most of it, accept for the racist bars.

I'm telling you, your lyrics would be so much better if you dropped all of the racism. Not to mention it is ruining your reputation. Right now, to the forums, your reputation is racist.

EDIT: What Yung Fire ment by the Barack Obama line was that the country needs to change. Barack Obama's big word was change. Although that is a very racist statement, it was a clever punchline.

The change line had nothing to do with mexicans. It was just a general statement. I did have ONE racist line, but its whatever.

And thanks for actual feedback.

And at least you are smart enough to understand lines, unlike Pablo haha.

EDIT: I had two racist lines. Yall probably wont catch the other. But it wasnt to do with Jrock's kind.

[Artille]

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Young Fire back at it, i could murk a bitch in any fucking way
I keep the green on me, no Saint Patricks Day
And i keep three hoes with me, thats a hat trick play
My flow is new born and sick, thats what the pediatric say
Killin' rappers with my flow, make them "rappers" vanish
And when i say i stay with a K, i dont mean what in spanish
Thats a shot at the beaners, bitch go make me a taco
We need to CHANGE our country, no barack-O..
'Bama, fuck im tired of the drama
I just wanna smoke a blunt, of the dankest marijuana
Droppin' bombs with my flow, and talk no Osama
Aka SK, And I will split ya crew in half aint talkin' no comma
Flow so sick, bitch where is my vaccine
Ya crew is lame as fuck, i guess you hang with that whack scene
And i stay smokin' on that motherfuckin' crack green
Swagged out bitch, red hat red shirt and smoke black jeans

FADEDDDDDDD

Keep it up. I liked most of it, accept for the racist bars.

I'm telling you, your lyrics would be so much better if you dropped all of the racism. Not to mention it is ruining your reputation. Right now, to the forums, your reputation is racist.

EDIT: What Yung Fire ment by the Barack Obama line was that the country needs to change. Barack Obama's big word was change. Although that is a very racist statement, it was a clever punchline.

The change line had nothing to do with mexicans. It was just a general statement. I did have ONE racist line, but its whatever.

And thanks for actual feedback.

And at least you are smart enough to understand lines, unlike Pablo haha.

EDIT: I had two racist lines. Yall probably wont catch the other. But it wasnt to do with Jrock's kind.

I thought you ment change the country as in remove all Mexicans because you just got done dropping a raicst line toward Mexicans

And the other racist line was the Osama line. As in Muslims (radical) drop bombs.

[YoungFire420]

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Young Fire back at it, i could murk a bitch in any fucking way
I keep the green on me, no Saint Patricks Day
And i keep three hoes with me, thats a hat trick play
My flow is new born and sick, thats what the pediatric say
Killin' rappers with my flow, make them "rappers" vanish
And when i say i stay with a K, i dont mean what in spanish
Thats a shot at the beaners, bitch go make me a taco
We need to CHANGE our country, no barack-O..
'Bama, fuck im tired of the drama
I just wanna smoke a blunt, of the dankest marijuana
Droppin' bombs with my flow, and talk no Osama
Aka SK, And I will split ya crew in half aint talkin' no comma
Flow so sick, bitch where is my vaccine
Ya crew is lame as fuck, i guess you hang with that whack scene
And i stay smokin' on that motherfuckin' crack green
Swagged out bitch, red hat red shirt and smoke black jeans

FADEDDDDDDD

Keep it up. I liked most of it, accept for the racist bars.

I'm telling you, your lyrics would be so much better if you dropped all of the racism. Not to mention it is ruining your reputation. Right now, to the forums, your reputation is racist.

EDIT: What Yung Fire ment by the Barack Obama line was that the country needs to change. Barack Obama's big word was change. Although that is a very racist statement, it was a clever punchline.

The change line had nothing to do with mexicans. It was just a general statement. I did have ONE racist line, but its whatever.

And thanks for actual feedback.

And at least you are smart enough to understand lines, unlike Pablo haha.

EDIT: I had two racist lines. Yall probably wont catch the other. But it wasnt to do with Jrock's kind.

I thought you ment change the country as in remove all Mexicans because you just got done dropping a raicst line toward Mexicans

And the other racist line was the Osama line. As in Muslims (radical) drop bombs.

Nah, i was just saying in general. But you, or whoever reads it, can take it in whatever way they want.

And yep. SF = Safe Kid. Good job. At least someone has a brain on here.

The last verse i wrote on here, no one understood all my disses in it. Go look and tell me who all i dissed in it...

"Let me start by saying, these dudes aint brave
On HQ, we got dudes hiding in vans and in caves
And theres dudes with some ugly ass girlfriends
Try me in a battle and have your mind doing whirlspins
And we got others hatin' on the crew, bitch just let us be
You're gunna pay for the hatin, just remember in America health care aint free"

Theres a couple obvious disses in it. Tell me the others though.

[Artille]

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"Let me start by saying, these dudes aint brave
On HQ, we got dudes hiding in vans and in caves Safe_Kid dis
And theres dudes with some ugly ass girlfriends YNR dis
Try me in a battle and have your mind doing whirlspins
And we got others hatin' on the crew, bitch just let us be Probably myself
You're gunna pay for the hatin, just remember in America health care aint free" Definitely Jrock

Theres a couple obvious disses in it. Tell me the others though.

They are all pretty obvious. You think YNRs female companion looks like a man. You, for some reason, think Safe_Kid is a radical muslim. I hate on your crew, but others do as well could be toward multiple people or myabe just CFE. And finally, another non-American dis toward Jrock.

[YoungFire420]

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"Let me start by saying, these dudes aint brave
On HQ, we got dudes hiding in vans and in caves Safe_Kid dis
And theres dudes with some ugly ass girlfriends YNR dis
Try me in a battle and have your mind doing whirlspins
And we got others hatin' on the crew, bitch just let us be Probably myself
You're gunna pay for the hatin, just remember in America health care aint free" Definitely Jrock

Theres a couple obvious disses in it. Tell me the others though.

They are all pretty obvious. You think YNRs female companion looks like a man. You, for some reason, think Safe_Kid is a radical muslim. I hate on your crew, but others do as well could be toward multiple people or myabe just CFE. And finally, another non-American dis toward Jrock.

Nope, nope. I knew people didnt understand it lol...

"Let me start by saying, these dudes aint brave Diss to all the hatin' HQ members.
On HQ, we got dudes hiding in vans and in caves Jrock and Safe Kid diss
And theres dudes with some ugly ass girlfriends Lil Jay diss
Try me in a battle and have your mind doing whirlspins Just a filler, also a diss to all the people wanting to battle me
And we got others hatin' on the crew, bitch just let us be Diss to all the hatin' HQ members.
You're gunna pay for the hatin, just remember in America health care aint free" YNR diss. Think about it.

[Safe_Kid]

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Ya digging this yeah?

Skim knows im asian, now hes assuming im Muslim, and hes assuming im Paki, and hes assuming ive got something to do with osama...

Aight man sick diss...really...lmao

[YoungFire420]

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Nothing holds me back, not even 'gravity will'
Bullet to your mouth, make you look like you got a 'cavity filled'
You say you kill beats? Bitch i 'actually do'
Talk about me being the best? Thats 'facts to me dude'
All these rappers aint spittin facts, just straight 'say-so'
Annoying ass fuck rappers, i tell them to get away and give them a couple 'pesos'
My flow has so many MULTIES, you can hardly even 'add it'
Im out, Young Fire aka He be a beat 'savage'

[YoungFire420]

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^^^^^^ FEEDBACK ^^^^^^^^^^^^

[CashMoneyMillionaire]

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igght yoo
im off the dome now let me in
we gon party till it drop till theres no gin
while you bitch pussys chillin in a trash bin
ur like a homeless man with a crusty ass chin
. . .
while u smoking on some crack
u beans are fuckin wack
i see u in them bins and i pull out my mack
woof woof time for a snack
u know i smoke dat green bro
i break ya fuckin spleen bro
and everybody up be saying im mean bro
u a fiend bro
im blowin this place
so we rock till we drop till we shitface
but not you!
u a crusty bitch without shoes
and u listen to blues
cuz u a fuckin fagget
ur a magget
dont try to hack it
cuz u cant stand it
bid, roll, light, toke and get high
smoke that shit till the mutha fuckin sky
u know i ride till i die
but u cant even try
cuz u flip burgers and eat stale fries

[IAmJay]

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Its gonna be the same way like the EyeCandii battle. All the faggots will vote for YMC. Dick riders..