"Nine Planets" by Projectillogic

[projectillogic]

Yall should like this song significantly better than the last one I submitted for review it's called "Nine Planets"

Let me know what yall think this one really pushes the envelope

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[Laudacity93]

This is one of the best tracks i've heard from you. not to big on the auto tune use tho but keep grinding... C

[Artille]

Off rip, autotune sounds horrible and unnecessary. The instrumental is pretty cool. Wish it hit harder though, your vocals drown it out. Hook is interesting. Your flow is kind of basic, but at least it's on beat. Keep at it and you will improve!

1.5/5

[mykill]

Sounds like you've got better at staying on beat. Some of it doesn't rhyme at all. Was that the intention?There's a lot of reverb in your vocals. Around the 2:40 mark you can definitely tell where you've punched in the vocals.

Mykill's Verdict: C+

[projectillogic]

This is one of my better songs but it's only one song out of 30 and I have over a hundred hours into song 31 and atleast 20 into song 32. I have like 15 songs or more that are as good as this one and probably way better but you really won't find too many songs on my page that are not really good but it's really hard for me to tell which ones are better like for the longest time my favorite of all 30 was time travel that nobody else likes I find myself constantly listing to my music for one cuz I'm my biggest fan, two I use examples of my self sounding really good to improve my flow and 3 I listen to them all the time trying to figure out how they sound to other people the mixing process is just the beginning I find the more I study a song the better I understand it I'm constantly improving my ears just so I can better tell how it sounds to someone who is not yet a fan of my music. In the beginning I used reverb nation 20 professional people paid crowd reviews and I was doing it for old and newer versions of some of my older songs just to get better. I would say for many many of the songs I had crowd reviewed I got mixed results. On alot of my songs I've had people tell me they are a 10 out of a 10 while other reviewers gave me a 1 out of 10 for the same damn song so I guess it's all about perception but I've found that about 70 percent of the people who listen to my music love it and about 30 percent of people hate it like country music but that's fine I hate country music with a passion and only a small percentage of people don't like it. Some people are going to cling to the fact that it's not as good as lil Wayne or something cuz that's just how they think but my music is exceptional for underground hip hip like if you can look past the fact that it's not done by a top producer then I think you can vibe with it. It takes me 100 to 300 hours to make a song usually so the reason it's reverby is because when I spent all that time mixing this is the version that sounded best to me above all others. I save the file after every little change then render the different versions and compare them and alot of times I gotta roll back it saves my ass every time and for me mixing can last like half of the entire time it takes for me to make the song. I've made many good songs in the past all using different processes and it seems like some of the older ones "for example the oldest song on my page from 2006" are as good or better than some of my new songs like back then I lacked the knowledge I do now but I practiced rapping a million times more back then plus that's when I just got out of the Navy and in the Navy we learned how to March in perfect step together down the road 300 deep while shouting kaidence at the top of our lungs the entire time and we marched to what we were singing I swear to god I sucked at rapping before the Navy then during and after the Navy I was good as hell but I've always been good at writing music cuz I've been doing it for the past 20 years for me rapping was an after thought cuz I didn't start writing tell 3 full years after I started writing and in school I won like every poetry contest they had. Anyways though I'm about 99% self taught I learned how to do this by finding the right industry standard software then fucking around with it trial and error. A few of my earliest songs were just straight recordings with no effects at all and they sound just as good as some of my mixed songs 10 years later. Not bad for self taught I've developed a process and for the last maybe 17 songs I've used the same process every time but before that I did songs differently every time and that's way back when I was experimenting and using different software every time. I have come to the conclusion that "world of deception" which is the only song I came out with about 7 years ago yeah now I think that's my best song and it's a rock song and I've only done a few rock songs but it's the only song I ever did with garage band I just failed to make anything else sound good in that program currently I'm using Sony acid to record into and then I use my secret collection of plug-ins but I mainly just use a certain vocal suite then I use others only if as a last resort if I needed. I've made maybe 18 songs in the last 3 years but after a year and a half of averaging 100 hours a week I stopped and have only released two more plus what I'm currently working on. When I first started using the software I use now every song I released got remixed like 10 times for the first 6 months but I eventually found my idea of perfection in all of them and I now usually get it right the first or second time and keep in mind I'm completely self taught and I've hardly read any books on any of this shit I learned by trial and error. I've been recording myself for 12 years now and before I dropped my last album I was only averaging 1 or 2 songs a year and every one turned out good by straight miracle that's why I did so few but the other reason is that writing use to be the hardest part of all of it but now I find writing to be like the easiest part it just takes a long time cuz I'm a perfectionist. But like I said I've released 30 damn songs and apparently I've saved the best ones for last but since I've never had any of these songs on any of these review sites before well I'm never gonna run out of songs to be reviewed plus I'm actively making new ones. I plan to keep going hard for the next 5 or 10 years so there's no telling what level I will take this shit but the plan is btobecome a legendary manifestation of power I don't want to settle for anything less plus I've been reading about and practicing zen for the past 16 years and I'm already enlightened and it makes you feel like a god

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Here's an interesting fact about this song. The song lollipop by lil Wayne has more significance to me than any other song that exists and one time I reversed the whole song and listened to It and at the end of 9 planets Wayne sings perfectly "we shed again that's right I said near we shed again that's right I said near we she'd again that's right I said near well that's a portion of lollipop reversed it seems like it belongs there plus it only seems natural that I would reverse lollipop backwards in my songs lollipop is dedicated to me after all my names jerome the song talks about when I met lil Wayne in concert and after 2 or 3 hours we had worked our way to the very front and I was screaming at the top of my lungs the entire time. Lollipop talks about that and it says jerome in it about 5 fucking times but here's something that only appears in the album version he whispers j.Hickman at the very beginning of the song and that's my first initial and last name. I'm not going to go into details right at this very moment but there's an older song dedicated to me too so here's what happened. He actually discovered me before I even knew who the fuck he was then I started appearing on the top radio show in my state 3 to 6 times a day consistently for 2 years and somewhere during that the station gave me free lil Wayne tickets and this was the first time I ever heard of him and then history happend that's why he said that pussy in my mouth had me lost for words or something like that and I make umm jump like jer jer well I was doing a bunch of jumping and dancing when I walked up to him but that other song that he kinda dedicated to me was before any of this so I came from like one good ass song to walking up to him in person and I was so fucking big back then that it only made sense shit I'm not worried about telling just a little of the whole story but I'm not going to tell the rest right now I was just talking about lollipop and nothing else really

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Here's an interesting fact about this song. The song lollipop by lil Wayne has more significance to me than any other song that exists and one time I reversed the whole song and listened to It and at the end of 9 planets Wayne sings perfectly "we shed again that's right I said near we shed again that's right I said near we she'd again that's right I said near well that's a portion of lollipop reversed it seems like it belongs there plus it only seems natural that I would reverse lollipop backwards in my songs lollipop is dedicated to me after all my names jerome the song talks about when I met lil Wayne in concert and after 2 or 3 hours we had worked our way to the very front and I was screaming at the top of my lungs the entire time. Lollipop talks about that and it says jerome in it about 5 fucking times but here's something that only appears in the album version he whispers j.Hickman at the very beginning of the song and that's my first initial and last name. I'm not going to go into details right at this very moment but there's an older song dedicated to me too so here's what happened. He actually discovered me before I even knew who the fuck he was then I started appearing on the top radio show in my state 3 to 6 times a day consistently for 2 years and somewhere during that the station gave me free lil Wayne tickets and this was the first time I ever heard of him and then history happend that's why he said that pussy in my mouth had me lost for words or something like that and I make umm jump like jer jer well I was doing a bunch of jumping and dancing when I walked up to him but that other song that he kinda dedicated to me was before any of this so I came from like one good ass song to walking up to him in person and I was so fucking big back then that it only made sense shit I'm not worried about telling just a little of the whole story but I'm not going to tell the rest right now I was just talking about lollipop and nothing else really

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Here's an interesting fact about this song. The song lollipop by lil Wayne has more significance to me than any other song that exists and one time I reversed the whole song and listened to It and at the end of 9 planets Wayne sings perfectly "we shed again that's right I said near we shed again that's right I said near we she'd again that's right I said near well that's a portion of lollipop reversed it seems like it belongs there plus it only seems natural that I would reverse lollipop backwards in my songs lollipop is dedicated to me after all my names jerome the song talks about when I met lil Wayne in concert and after 2 or 3 hours we had worked our way to the very front and I was screaming at the top of my lungs the entire time. Lollipop talks about that and it says jerome in it about 5 fucking times but here's something that only appears in the album version he whispers j.Hickman at the very beginning of the song and that's my first initial and last name. I'm not going to go into details right at this very moment but there's an older song dedicated to me too so here's what happened. He actually discovered me before I even knew who the fuck he was then I started appearing on the top radio show in my state 3 to 6 times a day consistently for 2 years and somewhere during that the station gave me free lil Wayne tickets and this was the first time I ever heard of him and then history happend that's why he said that pussy in my mouth had me lost for words or something like that and I make umm jump like jer jer well I was doing a bunch of jumping and dancing when I walked up to him but that other song that he kinda dedicated to me was before any of this so I came from like one good ass song to walking up to him in person and I was so fucking big back then that it only made sense shit I'm not worried about telling just a little of the whole story but I'm not going to tell the rest right now I was just talking about lollipop and nothing else really

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Based on what people that have reviewed this song said I am certain there are many many many songs better than this one it's hard for me to tell cuz I love all of them more than anybody else ever could these are my children so thanks for all the reviews on all of the sites I'm on they help me understand more and fill me in on what I should duplicate

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[MC_Crary]

So confused.