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  • Lil_Zimmie - TOKYO





    LYRICS
    SPOILER
    -Walid-


    Pass the mic I’m going all in,
    You babysitters still crawling
    The shepherd right down the hole
    So I guess it’s time to see you fuckers falling
    One by one you all fall in
    On the trip you be yawning
    I got a loaded clip with a bullet in it so you bet your ass that I’m all in.
    Stuff that, but they bust back
    Guts out, when we rush back
    Rush out, Rush ho-ur
    Fast and furious
    That’s us
    When we
    Crush wack
    MC’s,
    All of you on mainstream
    On TV, LCD, radio and MP3.
    I’m chillin like I’m in Fiji,
    Chillin cause I’m a real G
    Writing warnings on your apartheid wall, yeah bitch I’m Banksy
    Don’t thank me
    Fed reserve, they don’t deserve
    To bank me
    Or loan me, you’re all phoney, don’t act like you’re my homey
    Yo, bitch you do not know me
    Yo, bitch she always phone me
    Yo bitch she always call me tellin me she feelin lonely
    Yo, I changed my flow, yo I take it slow
    Yo, Donald Trump I let you know that I understand
    The mother you dropped on Afghanistan, gave the upperhand to
    My adrenaline pumpin and thumpin, I see your plan, your master plan
    Superficial, self-entitled selfish plan, now won’t you comprehend?
    That pandora locked it’s plans, god damn.




    Goddamn.


    And Donald Chump might do his planning.
    But God always plans better.


    Bring it!


    -Zaim-
    Okay i'll bring it ay
    Run the world with my pistol ay
    Change the world with the finger ay
    Run the game like im usain ay
    Saw that man in person ay
    Looked like he wanted to start cursing ay




    Walk to the moon and back
    You others rapper wack
    No momentum.on the track
    Cut the tail off the rat
    Donald Trump i am not a fan
    You are not a man dropping bombs
    On Afghanistan
    Screech and swerve like im in japan
    Test you for your words like a NAPLAN
    Never nap man i just hop on the mic and snap like a pap man


    Yeah super saiyan flow you know how i go
    Go hard like an unlucky show
    I go where no man ever dares to go
    Im.never slow when push comes to shove you never show
    Even in the dark i glow
    Murder she wrote on an iPAD
    And my mumma tell me i should be glad
    Never sad never mad just grind like my grandad yeah


    Lurking im hurtin
    Smurkin While im.murking
    Working your girl jerking
    Swervin i am the greatest that is for certain
    Stand on top.of the globe as its turning
    Burning for the top you get cut like a crop
    Leave you on the curb i stomp
    Your on the floor i mop
    Kill you then i Diddy Bop
    Yeah i Diddy Bop
    You boys gon flop, drop
    On the spot never stop
    Free no matter what like a corrupted cop
    Straught to top like a Loft
    Bars real tight like an army knot
    Stay in line like a parking lot
    Never stop till im on top
    You heard us spaz now show us what the rest of yall really gott



    let me know what you guys think

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  • #2
    Dope beat and delivery
    too quiet on the 2nd verse though
    7.5/10
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    • #3
      Originally posted by Flame Beats View Post
      Dope beat and delivery
      too quiet on the 2nd verse though
      7.5/10

      Thanks brother!!! We got a few collabs on the way and i can tell you now my shit aint quiet no more!!




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      • #4
        Walid killed this one! Zimmie, your flow is improving, but falls off beat at some points and sounds choppy on some of the faster parts. This beat goes hard too! Overall, this is a decent track. Keep it up!

        7/10

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Artille View Post
          Walid killed this one! Zimmie, your flow is improving, but falls off beat at some points and sounds choppy on some of the faster parts. This beat goes hard too! Overall, this is a decent track. Keep it up!

          7/10
          thank you bro! Walid definitely killed it his in a rap/rock band so his been making music for ages and has performed infront of crowds and such haha so his on another level to me hoping to learn a few things off him to improve my skills haha

          and id say my flow is definitely improving theres more work to be done but i'm making a conscious effort to fix it so hopefully it will reflect in more of my work going into the future
          Last edited by Zimmie; 05-14-2017, 03:03 AM.




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          • #6
            This song is tight but I like the first rapper better than the second one
            im schizophrenic
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            • #7
              I like the flow and delivery. See if the engineer could have your vocals compressed a bit so that you sit with the beat.
              Place a delay effect on the talking parts.
              The second guy should slow down his flow and keep up with the flow. He could listen to Silk the shocker because he had a very unique way of rapping like this. I fuck with the track though.

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