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**Safe_Kid** · 12-03-2009, 02:15 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Looks good.

**ItzTheRemixShawty!** · 12-03-2009, 09:44 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Originally posted by Safe_Kid

Looks good.

Prociate That Safe_Kid

**IAmJay** · 12-03-2009, 09:46 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Agree with Safe_Kid.

**Enigma** · 12-03-2009, 10:26 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

It sounds very cliche to me for some reason, and I was picturing a girl singing the hook in my head when necessary. It needs a little more depth in it I think.

**ItzTheRemixShawty!** · 12-03-2009, 10:28 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Originally posted by Enigma

It sounds very cliche to me for some reason, and I was picturing a girl singing the hook in my head when necessary. It needs a little more depth in it I think.

Any Suggestions?

**YoungFire420** · 12-03-2009, 10:35 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Originally posted by Dizzy Mays

Originally posted by Enigma

It sounds very cliche to me for some reason, and I was picturing a girl singing the hook in my head when necessary. It needs a little more depth in it I think.

Any Suggestions?

I think he means like maybe on the girl chorus. Have the girl sing more than just "studio love". Like make the lines more in depth. Like more to them, then "i want that studio love". Even though, i think its sick how it is.

**Enigma** · 12-03-2009, 10:37 PM

Re: (Suggestions/Comments/Feedback)Would Be Appreciated

Originally posted by Dizzy Mays

So Im Writing This Song(Singing On Hook)Lemme Know What You Think Of This
Note:I Didnt Put This In My Thread Because Its Not Going To Be My Song Im Just Writing It
Also The Part In Parenthesis Just Means Its A Echo...Its A R&B Song BTW

[Song Title]:Studio Love
[Male Chorus]
She Say My Love(Love) reminds her of Mu-sic (stretch out "mu" and end abruptly with "sic")
So When She Want It, my mic she uses (stretch out "us" in uses, the same style as ^)
Ooo At The Studio Ooo At The Studio Ooo At The Studio
She Want That Studio Love (I think it would be better to give that line each it's own bar, which means a breath after "love" for the bar to end, then the next one)
She Want That Studio Love
[Female Chorus]
I Want That Studio Love I Want That Studio Love
At The Studio Ahh At The Studio
Me And You Should Go Lets Go To The Studio

Anything I Should Change?

I got a laugh singing it out loud, that is hearing myself whisper it lol.

I made editing in the quote. My quick take, that is if you sing on the hook which I'm assuming.