3 Throwaway Verses- Zimmie

[Zimmie]

had a collaboration lined up but it didn't work out i have a few verses i did for the collab not my usual style in terms of subject matter but it was a way for me to practise/experiment with my flow


Verse 1 0:23-0:54
Verse 2 1:26-end



i forgot to turn off the voice effects on verse 2 on the first link so my voice does some weird shit on the second half

overall the verses are in my opinion garbage but i'd like to hear what you guys think and any feedback on where i can improve

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[ianahbtune]

it sound a bit annoying but u coming great

[WaywardSon]

i dont think they are garbage like forreal the lyrics are dope. what beat is that?? i really like it

[Zimmie]

i dont think they are garbage like forreal the lyrics are dope. what beat is that?? i really like it

Thanks bro i feel its a bit to trivial and predictable

And this producer named Jaycam dope producer made the beat

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lolzz It's fire. but just anticlimatic unless you put all three verses together. (which you should've) With all three verses together, It's a triumph.

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Made a version with all 3 versions together https://www.audiomack.com/song/alex-2550/ktt-versev3

[Waynasite]

Why are they verses for ktt

[Zimmie]

Why are they verses for ktt

Some doods wanted to collab brother

[Flame Beats]

flow is good but delivery is a little quiet

[Zimmie]

flow is good but delivery is a little quiet

i think there something wrong with my mic or something because im usually yelling or close to yelling but it aint picking up shit