Earthquake- zimmie

[Zimmie]

recent track i did after a very very long hiatus let me know how you guys find it




LYRICS
SPOILERYeah fuck your stigma
Come thru with an engima
Come thru like king kong the gorilla
Clouded in this mind of mine
On the constant grind
Yeah feel my subconscious read it and weep
Climbing to the top of the peak but its steep
Never checking the time stuck in my actions like a mime
Locked in this mind of mine




First verse was simple
But now we get it poppin like a pimple
Leaving holes in your complexion like a dimple
Break it down simple on instrumentals
Funnel the words over the rhythim of time itself
Heal your body with the music knew you needed help
Not appreciating health always chasing wealth
Thats a weak mental like fire to wax
Take your soul and tax and thats facts


This arrangement of rocks under your feet
Levitiating in the universe till your asleep on a hearse
I know the thought hurts as it oughta
Lyrical slaughter i caught up i had to
Come thru bring it back like a sunroof
What would it take to shape shift your mind
One of a kind always going to ride
On my grind never check the time
They gon cry on my shrine



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[ianahbtune]

it's a good song though

[RIOT]

I did a verse over this same beat for my very first project! I think I called it "Stepiinmyrealm" or something! You did good over it tho. Only thing I would say is put a little more energy in your takes when you record em. Your lyrics are nice, but I think if you were a little more aggressive in your delivery, your style would shine. Good job overall tho, bro, keep grinding!

[Waynasite]

recent track i did after a very very long hiatus let me know how you guys find it




LYRICS
SPOILERYeah fuck your stigma
Come thru with an engima
Come thru like king kong the gorilla
Clouded in this mind of mine
On the constant grind
Yeah feel my subconscious read it and weep
Climbing to the top of the peak but its steep
Never checking the time stuck in my actions like a mime
Locked in this mind of mine




First verse was simple
But now we get it poppin like a pimple
Leaving holes in your complexion like a dimple
Break it down simple on instrumentals
Funnel the words over the rhythim of time itself
Heal your body with the music knew you needed help
Not appreciating health always chasing wealth
Thats a weak mental like fire to wax
Take your soul and tax and thats facts


This arrangement of rocks under your feet
Levitiating in the universe till your asleep on a hearse
I know the thought hurts as it oughta
Lyrical slaughter i caught up i had to
Come thru bring it back like a sunroof
What would it take to shape shift your mind
One of a kind always going to ride
On my grind never check the time
They gon cry on my shrine



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Love this

[Zimmie]

Love this

aw thanks friend

[WaywardSon]

lyrics are really 10/10 and go great with the dope ass beat ---that you were gonna send me forever ago..

[Zimmie]

I did a verse over this same beat for my very first project! I think I called it "Stepiinmyrealm" or something! You did good over it tho. Only thing I would say is put a little more energy in your takes when you record em. Your lyrics are nice, but I think if you were a little more aggressive in your delivery, your style would shine. Good job overall tho, bro, keep grinding!

send that to me fam i wanna see different persepctives on the beat haha

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lyrics are really 10/10 and go great with the dope ass beat ---that you were gonna send me forever ago..

sorry fam i keep forgetting what the name of the beat is on youtube ill go on a little hold on

http://www61.zippyshare.com/v/FrfOLBZ1/file.html there you are friend enjoy kill it for me

[WaywardSon]

thanks fam....