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    Last edited by mykill; 01-03-2018, 09:59 PM. Reason: better quality updated

  • #2
    this is fire bro you need to get a better mic fam and improve your quality because it will improve your sound HEAPS lyrically this is very impressive




    #FREEVELVET

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    • #3
      thanks i actually have ordered a mic

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      • #4
        1) not the biggest fan of slave mentality line... 2) You lose the rhyme scheme at some point 3) quality and some other technicals could use an improvement, but I believe you've heard that before and are working on that

        Mykill's Verdict: B. Solid B.

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        • #5
          This is dope I just wasn't a fan of how you ended the bar "when he start bitching, yeah" Keep up the hunger 4/5
          https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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          • #6
            this is pretty dope man , that beat tho is fireeeeeeeeee!! the lyrics are pretty good man, but the line about rapping agressively sounds forced coz you dont sound angry man you sound like your in a "question" type of time, if you wana sound angry on the track the best way is to shout like your having a row with someone but obviously keep your flow, the concept is good though, and i cant say anything about quality coz mine isnt great but overall not a bad track man 3.5/5


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            • #7
              The instrumental is very smooth. Off rip, the mixing needs work. The vocals are too high, but still flat. Despite the accent, the flow is actually pretty good. The rhyme schemes are weird and kinda inconsistent, but you make it work. Lyrics are interesting, but lack hard/stand out bars. Song is pretty short, but not bad.

              3/5

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              • #8
                More specifically .. breath tho. One beathe two

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by BloodKin View Post
                  More specifically .. breath tho. One beathe two
                  what?????

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                  • #10
                    sorry r & e got misplaced. breathe tho. one breath two

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by BloodKin View Post
                      sorry r & e got misplaced. breathe tho. one breath two
                      lol mannn i still dont get what you mean

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                      • #12
                        great vibe i luv the lyrics the quality is the onli thing wrong once you tighten dhat up you'll be good...keep going

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