Phone Jumpin- Yung Zimmie

[Zimmie]

heard this beat on D6 it was fckin FIRE had to do something on it lol



Lyrics
SPOILERgot a couple screws loose
girl sold me out for the grey goose
hoes will be hoes aint that the truth
mothafckin beast off the leash
let me feast on the weak
ripping out sheet after sheet
tryna find bars to spit every week
climbing to the top of the peak
keep an eye out and you’ll find what you seek


you don’t appeal to the real
you appeal to what you think you should feel
you know the drill
have you looking like you just walked out of a blizzard
i spit bars sound like magic from a wizard
got fcked over it attacked my feelings
now i just use a cold shoulder for my dealings
look up theres no ceilings
running in hell thats only way i can exercise my demons


bring it back


i gotta spit that get back on track
snap when i attack
leave these haters on they backs
like they girls be
i come thru dead man walking like a zombie
straight up like the hand of a nazi
you can not see
unlucky thats the posse
these basic hoes they just wishy washy




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[mykill]

Flow was on point. Mixing needs some work. A bit random, but a solid freestyle-type track none the less. Some creative use of adlibs would have gave this a few more points.

Mykill's Verdict: B+

[Zimmie]

Flow was on point. Mixing needs some work. A bit random, but a solid freestyle-type track none the less. Some creative use of adlibs would have gave this a few more points.

Mykill's Verdict: B+

Thanks heaps man yeah im not great with the mixing stuff but working on it definitely also thanks for recognising my flow improvement bro!

And this music is throwaways i be doing for sport the EP i got Conceptual records on original beats on the way bro!

[Laudacity93]

I agree with Mykill some fire adlibs would of knocked this out of the park. At some parts you seemed a bit rushed. Keep it up 4/5

[Gibbsy]

that classical sample is sick!! i love the fast flow to always nice to hear those syllables packed only critique is you lack switch ups in sound, tone of voice is key, whispering , shouting, singing , things like that will keep the sound fresh all the way through, but for a simple little track this is nice man!! beat choice is dope!!

3.5/5 need more tho, diff pitches and stuff ya know?

[Mobbin Moe]

"I gotta couple strews loose off the gray goose". The way you started off i liked that, 3/5 keep that shit komin !

[Artille]

Not a bad rendition. The flow is on point, but lacks emotion and sounds flat. Lyrics are decent. I wish it wasn't so short. Mixing sounds pretty good.

3.5/5