Gibbsy - Run It

[Gibbsy]

Another one from the dozens of tracks i'v been compiling recently, got a couple collabs coming with some of yall to ,
this is kinda trappy i cant lie an usually i ent into it but i wanted to try something diff again aha




https://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/th...vibe-mode.html
https://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/th...ng-zimmie.html

[Mobbin Moe]

"When I'm finished I'm like Popeye off the spinach" +1 that line was dope track 8.5/10 keep it goin !

[Gibbsy]

"When I'm finished I'm like Popeye off the spinach" +1 that line was dope track 8.5/10 keep it goin !

cheers for feedback man

The bar actually goes .. "i ride rhymes and that's it i ent thinking of gimmicks but when i do punch i'm just like Popeye with spinach"

[Artille]

This is a pretty interesting song. The instrumental is unique, so is the hook. Very catchy. I like your flow on the verses. The lyrics and rhyme schemes are impressive as well. The mixing isn't too bad, but it could use some improvement. Sounds kinda flat to me. The DJ tags are annoying.

Overall, this is a solid effort. I'd give it a 4/5.

[mykill]

This would be good with a feature on it. Someone with a different style. It would be more multi-faceted. Mood of the song is hard though. I like the energy of the track. The drops take away from the feeling overall, so if you plan on putting it on something, I'd foot the bill to get the untagged. End of the song was wasted. You could have put some more adlibs or talking or something. Or some "uh huh, yeah. it's Gibbsy" or something like that. Would have wrapped it up better me thinks.

Mykill's Verdict: B+

[Zimmie]

only thing i can say definitely needs fixing is mastering also the singing was a bit jarring its good just coul dbe better

verses are spot on though

7/10

[Laudacity93]

I really like the 2nd verse. I agree with everything already said. Definitely add something to the end and buy without tags if you plan on using this 4.3/5