Lil Boat Freestyle- Yung Zimmie (Water: The Mixtape Coming Soon)

[Zimmie]

lyrics

SPOILERstr8 out my writers block
time to rewind the clock
pull up to the spot
like a boat on the dock
they say the pen mightier then the sword
then i gotta get locked up for an illegal weapon
cause I’m stepping
on necks when I’m rapping
restricting airflow
listen as yung zimbie
go she say my dick the antidote
i don’t believe a word out her throat
thats murder she wrote
she whine and emote
i can’t even cope
sorry lets elope


bring it back
snap on a track
like a kodak
thats a fact
they already know that
i said bring it back like a throw back
pin the tail on the donkey
going to the top y’all can’t block me
you know the road a lil rocky


spark up like a lighter
she strong wit the head no black cyna
zombie so fly like a pet canary
need a secretary for all these shots I’m sending
stick thru the mud hopefully their a happy ending
keep my eye on the map
fiending for the top like aristocrats
hold it down like a snap chat
quit thinking about what i lack


that just how it goes
they already know
focus on my flows
beast in civilian clothes


thats just how it goes
they already know
focus on my flows
beast in civilian clothes


shining vibing
you know that I’m vibrant
aiming for the top, climbing
spitting heat you know i change the climate
kill em on a track
like hitman with the silence


going off the ricter scale
water the mixtape the holy grail
You climb to the peak slower then a snail
Cant see you guys like i read my raps in brail
The top is lonely and i climb up it like jack and jill
with the pall in my hand




21 years of age
filled with rage
day after day
all these days
letting it all go on the world stage
wasting away
gotta keep it real
i don’t understand your appeal
i pop up leave you scrambling urgently
like a fire drill
thats a lie yung zombie no gangsta
more of a prankster
rather then then be a wanksta
hands up 5 fingers
4 fingers in
3 fingers left
peace sign thats a deuce up
but thats 1 up for the deuce cup



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[THA GR8 M8]

u need to step back and rethink every part of ur rapping m8

[Zimmie]

u need to step back and rethink every part of ur rapping m8

trial and error fam all part of the process

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this the original song btw fam

ill be doing a 5 song Mixtape over popular rap beats in an attempt to practise flowing on different style beats and such ill be experimental with my flow and lyrical content on this it'll be a casual listen

[WaywardSon]

i like it bro...all we can do is rap whats in our mind anyway.....dont mind that guy 7/10

[Zimmie]

i like it bro...all we can do is rap whats in our mind anyway.....dont mind that guy 7/10

Thanks bro I don't mind criticism it helps grow and develop our art this just a little mixtape thing im putting together to expand my rap ability because i do got a lot to work on in terms of mic presence and such

Need a new microphone as well tbh haha

[WaywardSon]

preaching to the congregation

[THA GR8 M8]

trial and error fam all part of the process

I have still yet to hear u stay on beat lol I think u need to worry about that first m8

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i like it bro...all we can do is rap whats in our mind anyway.....dont mind that guy 7/10

lmao u 2 go back and forth and each other’s threads saying u like the songs. be true to urselves man. Ur songs are trash too m8 but this section turned into a no honest feedback section so that’s y mans not improving

[Zimmie]

I have still yet to hear u stay on beat lol I think u need to worry about that first m8

Haha! Suppose you right fam i rush tracks a little to much this song i did i made in under an hour which obviously doesn't give much time to construct a song my mindset going into this was 'i got an hour to spare mine as well rap some goofy shit for a min' i'll get back to the drawing board on these other tracks im in the process of developing thats part of the reason im making this mixtape actually the goal is im going to emulate other rapper flows and styles to build up a skill-set i'll make sure to take a lot more time when making the music and not rush things out the door i appreciate your feedback bruh

[THA GR8 M8]

Haha! Suppose you right fam i rush tracks a little to much this song i did i made in under an hour which obviously doesn't give much time to construct a song my mindset going into this was 'i got an hour to spare mine as well rap some goofy shit for a min' i'll get back to the drawing board on these other tracks im in the process of developing thats part of the reason im making this mixtape actually the goal is im going to emulate other rapper flows and styles to build up a skill-set i'll make sure to take a lot more time when making the music and not rush things out the door i appreciate your feedback bruh

nah I feel u m8. I used to not be on beat back in like 2010 lol but I’m tryna go give u real feedback bc mr bin laden is not too good at giving feedback that will help u

[Zimmie]

nah I feel u m8. I used to not be on beat back in like 2010 lol but I’m tryna go give u real feedback bc mr bin laden is not too good at giving feedback that will help u

Haha appreciate it fam whole point of this section to give feedback and better our work from it

[THA GR8 M8]

Haha appreciate it fam whole point of this section to give feedback and better our work from it

imma send u a hook and beat from 2014 that I never finished to see how u can do on it (if u like the beat and idea)

[Mobbin Moe]

I heard you do better, seem like you didn't care much.