Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Yung Zimmie - I Died & Letter 2 U & SPEEDBOAT

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Yung Zimmie - I Died & Letter 2 U & SPEEDBOAT



    lyrics

    SPOILERyou see i wake up and face the demon in the mirror
    see the face staring back clearer
    see the glimmer in my eyes
    turn around and see the truth in their lies
    stare right at the roof awake all night in bed
    sometimes it gets rowdy in my head
    unload shots take eternal rest
    but i stand still look to the sky and see that i just might be blessed
    try to shake the good out me like a bird in a nest
    but you see i stuck thru the test of time
    put my emotions in rhymes


    you see i spent time facing an hour glass
    seeing the sand of time fade
    now i stand here with not much to remain
    strange things going in in my strange brain
    gotta maintain
    all the damn time
    sick of hearing shit thru the grapevine
    rather hear it from you on FaceTime
    always scared to Face Time
    so i got rid of my watch
    sick of going back and fourth lie squash




    bitch am i psychotic for being hopeful
    want to retire somewhere coastal
    maybe have my socials hit global
    you got me walking in circles
    let me drown up in my tears
    relive all of my fucking fears
    always kept away from the alcohol ddidnt want to kill my liver
    but girl i might just drown in my sins for you turn into a sinner
    rest my finger on the trigger
    aim at my medulla killing my thoughts and my dreams
    at least now ill find peace
    damn


    music music and money
    you heard that right
    you hear that right
    you adjust your headset
    and i adjust my mic


    you could fly to japan fly to milian
    text all my mans
    i still find you right in my hands
    you talk all your shit
    act like i aint shit
    you know that loose lips sink ships
    used to the lips between your hips
    when i go in there its like acid trips
    toxic hazardous
    just some words to use to describe you
    and your love
    i stay fly so fly like a turtle dove







    lyrics

    SPOILERuh


    walking hand and hand in the sunshine
    till the sunset gotta ignore your rep
    chasing every letter up in the alphabet
    never stumble retracing my steps
    gotta come alive in the night time
    you know its the right time
    eat up like its dinner time
    have you opened up like christmas time
    on my mind on my line
    oh my god can i ever find time
    can i ever find some time some time to my mothafckin self


    i can get psychotic
    get on the beats become melodic
    every damn day be feeling robotic
    you put pep in my step
    put right to my left
    come thru my mind leave nothing not swept
    oh my god i point a finger up to the clouds
    try to find everything before i drown
    you laugh at wedding rings ah I’m a clown
    put my inhibitions into lost and found
    they never get found
    up in the sky till i land safe and sound


    till i land safe and sound
    u drop tears you got drown
    put my inhibitions into lost and found
    they will never get found get found


    cold winds blow
    leave me froze
    i go where no man ever dares to go
    never slow just get in my mode
    i know you tempt with ur nose
    a beast in civilian clothes
    that be me till i lay where the worms stay
    battling depression
    anxiety
    i stick a finger to the mirror it don’t frighten me
    light a candle to my soul enlighten me
    demons in my sleep they inviting me
    enticing me
    but i come for a price aint nothing gone move for free
    and I’m priceless see
    you can’t have me
    then i smile with glee
    can’t u see i be who i be
    i give life to you like an artery
    you apart of me






    @FlameBeats did something on one of your beats fam not the best in the world but a fun song either way


    FEEDBACK

    https://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/th...uv-family.html

    https://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/th...ming-tape.html




    #FREEVELVET

  • #2
    BROOOOOOO I HAVE SOMETHING TO THAT 'I DIED' BEAT...
    but lets see. On I Died so far i like the vibe you're in, but theres a number of times it seems like its rushing. like its a bit off yknow? thats my biggest thing with that other than that its straight. I myself am not a fan of the repeating of things that aren't like idk it just doesnt feel like they needed to be? but thats a personal thing. (3/5)

    the beat on letter 2 u is TOUGH, there's a certain monotone-ness which isnt necessarily bad, but I feel like the monotone should get carried by the bars or "sauce" you bring to the track. (2.5/5)


    Speedboat is an attempt at being less monotone i feel, i say 'i feel' because it comes off as like youre not giving 100% with the vocal inflictions youre doing. and idk if youre doing more than one take and dragging the vocals to the beat to where the match perfectly but maybe give that a shot if you haven't, we gotta find a way to get you in the pockets of the instrumentals better


    OVERALL

    I like the first one the best. Solid efforts all the way through

    Comment


    • #3
      all dope bro as usuall!, My favourite is SPEEDBOAT you went innnn, Keep going bro your doing well! Ima get beats to you sooooon man
      R.I.P DAD

      Comment


      • #4
        Originally posted by StephenKING View Post
        BROOOOOOO I HAVE SOMETHING TO THAT 'I DIED' BEAT...
        but lets see. On I Died so far i like the vibe you're in, but theres a number of times it seems like its rushing. like its a bit off yknow? thats my biggest thing with that other than that its straight. I myself am not a fan of the repeating of things that aren't like idk it just doesnt feel like they needed to be? but thats a personal thing. (3/5)

        the beat on letter 2 u is TOUGH, there's a certain monotone-ness which isnt necessarily bad, but I feel like the monotone should get carried by the bars or "sauce" you bring to the track. (2.5/5)


        Speedboat is an attempt at being less monotone i feel, i say 'i feel' because it comes off as like youre not giving 100% with the vocal inflictions youre doing. and idk if youre doing more than one take and dragging the vocals to the beat to where the match perfectly but maybe give that a shot if you haven't, we gotta find a way to get you in the pockets of the instrumentals better


        OVERALL

        I like the first one the best. Solid efforts all the way through
        thank you fam I Died is one of my favourite songs ive ever made only thing i dislike about it mostly is sometimes my voice isnt as prominent on the beat

        Letter 2 You is a chill track i whipped it up in 20 mins or so just whilst thinking on shit

        Speed Boat was maximum 2 takes lol! but its alright as a concept but the execution a bit poor

        Originally posted by J.M.I View Post
        all dope bro as usuall!, My favourite is SPEEDBOAT you went innnn, Keep going bro your doing well! Ima get beats to you sooooon man
        thank you man i like SpeedBoat haha only bad thing i find about it is the i fucked up a few words on there lol but i kept it all


        anyway more coming friends hopefully i can get into a more creative zone i been using my music more like a diary then anything lately i need to build on some concepts and work on experimenting with my vocals and shit




        #FREEVELVET

        Comment


        • #5
          Great to see you still rapping. Great job on that song “I Died”
          Visit My Music Page To Hear Updated Daily Music https://www.bandlab.com/mobb_g

          Comment

          Working...
          X