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  • S - Transition - EP

    There's 6 tracks it's play them one by one


    ATAF LYRICS
    SPOILER
    Is my pride worth breaking
    Or are my dreams worth chasing
    Should my legs begin shaking
    Or should I smile in the midst of facing
    This adversity I’m encased with
    I know it’ll hurt for me, this lane switch
    But I’ma merge if I see its vacant
    Impatient Patience (This whole section's about leaving a guaranteed check w/ military to pursue passions)
    Freedom is such a sweet, sweet fragrance But you must work if its worth it for you to spray it
    Life goes, and fouls get more flagrant
    Embrace it
    Life tolls and you must pay it
    But night strolls can do great maintenance I need those (In the Navy most maintenance was done on night check)
    No folding these great paintings (I wont hide or put my art away anymore)
    To withhold just proves my anchorage (The navy uses anchors)
    Held me down (The navy held me down but I could feel it taking away what made me me everyday)
    Yet took my spark and tainted it
    So this obtuse thoughts look all right(To some, leaving a guaranteed check for a dream you look crazy)
    Depending on how you angle it
    And the light keeps me going through these dark waters, right in front I dangle it(So now I make my own light)
    Angler Fish

    These explanations are not of bars or entendres, just of some things that were more personal
    Also, ATAF stands for A True Angler Fish or All Tools Accounted For, which is something you have to do before the end of your shift where I was stationed, so the poem marks the end of my shift so to speak as well as me being an Angler Fish


    Inner Morale Gain

    SPOILER
    God I’m high off life
    God had known my strife
    This has been years in the making
    I told yall no folding these great paintings
    All gold here (hair)
    But these aint saiyans
    Live by these words, these aint sayings
    So in the midst of all of your praying’ and parlayin (While yall pray and talk about it I'm gonna exceed)
    I’m passing the bar plaintiff
    It aint if, it’s when/win
    So don’t it confused,
    That’s with “I” not “He” (‘when’ spelled with I not he.... this is one of my favorite bars of all time)
    Cause I was not born to lose
    I assume, I’m like foreign to these dudes
    I believe in me, must be boring to be you
    Oh dur (ODOR), like peeyuu
    With faux furs, and cheap suits
    I swerve and squeeze through D’Evils
    How you love our sound but treat us like we beetles
    How you treasure me and hunt me like an eagle? (America has this thing with hunting what they love)
    Oh you think taking shit is treating us like equals?
    Yall so see through (these niggas can’t be serious)


    But I’m finally at a place where the sun rise
    God bless me, gesundheit (I have blessed myself, feeling godly so to speak)
    I gotta do it to get it done right
    I rep US, B, like a thumb drive (Another of my favorite bars)
    Till death I’m never tongue tied
    Fuck 4-5
    If Barack don’t drive we ghost ride
    I just had to say that for my own pride
    Finally I can say I hope I don’t die
    And well, finally mean it
    Like when your room dirty and you tell mom that it’s the cleanest
    Run back, hide that mess before she see it
    That’s how I would be when yall would ask me how I’m feeling
    But now, but now, but now, but now
    My glow up through the ceiling
    Freedom done gave me healing
    Uniforms just block my spirit
    No more ships if I can’t steer it
    To courageous to be fearing
    I appreciate the experience
    I know I left, but I appreciate all of those that didn’t
    I’m a better me now, wanna be cruising to see mo sea time
    Now I be choosing when I got free time
    Can’t see me losing I’m on my meek grind
    Dreams getting lucid the more I reach mine
    Taking these bruises so I don’t rewind
    Faced all the demons until I beat mine
    Slave niggas told me it’d be decline
    But you can’t tell a path until you read mines (tell a path/read mines ie. minesweeper)(telepath/read minds)(tell a path/ read mine)
    You see now




    Flowers in Darkness

    SPOILER
    The sun doesn’t rise on this side
    Bright hides from nightlife
    Night tides at high rise
    My eyes
    Can’t adjust
    Must I trust, In such other senses?
    Sinnin’ senseless individuals can sense this shift
    Since then mention of the minuscule ascends this myth
    Intentions of visual suspend in times like this
    Smells of an angel, This is heaven scent
    Illusions of grandeur from the slightest whiff
    Still soft to the touch, in the tightest grip
    But.
    The slightest slip can cause panic
    Do you love me or not, I say as I do damage(I find it funny how people pluck petals from flowers during love me love me not)
    Pluck away at everything making you above average
    My sun doesn’t rise on this side
    My flower resides in the sun
    I know Ill find another tomorrow
    But tomorrow never comes
    I wrote this poem with the intentions of showing someone how beautiful i viewed them, but while writing it I wanted it to be able to tackle many topics, so I've used it for Domestic Violence/Losing Religion/ and others, this one specifically is used to battle mental health showing how you could come from a dark place and find something special that makes the world better but end up destroying the thing that made you happy and revert back to the dark that you came from


    Let me know if yall want the rest of the lyrics and such



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    Last edited by StephenKING; 11-01-2018, 02:39 PM.

  • #2
    something i've loved about the stuff i heard from your music is the atmospheric beats some of my favourite beats to write to are very atmospheric you hit similar topics to me as well in terms of spirituality and day-to-day struggles and that Inner Morale Gain is a shining example of this i love the things you talked about and the subjects you hit

    Inner Morale Loss is incredible fam and one of my fav songs ive heard on Tha Studio the subject matter again is powerful and creative i liked the speech as well the bars you spit from 1:07 is fckin pure fire bro i feel you on every point you raised in that verse and i do wish you carried that verse a little longer but the song its self is pure fire either way the speech you ended with again fire the vocal effects you put are quality and give your voice this sense of authority and vibrancy its some martin luther king shit you projecting on this! haha

    i dig the speeches and the spoken word poems as well you have included in this project i love touches like that it gives the music a sense of vibrancy and authenticity i do wish you included some lyrics with the link just so its easier for me to follow cause i feel im sleeping on some bars and concepts

    also your song lengths are perfect for an upcoming rapper 1-2 minutes is perfect for solo songs i find because you express ur ideas and can get more people listening to them the project its self is very vibrant, authentic and powerful in the subject matter and places you explored thru out i can tell u put ur all into ur music also are you at all influenced by KRIT i do see and hear a lot of similarities in ur music with his




    #FREEVELVET

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Zimmie View Post
      something i've loved about the stuff i heard from your music is the atmospheric beats some of my favourite beats to write to are very atmospheric you hit similar topics to me as well in terms of spirituality and day-to-day struggles and that Inner Morale Gain is a shining example of this i love the things you talked about and the subjects you hit

      Inner Morale Loss is incredible fam and one of my fav songs ive heard on Tha Studio the subject matter again is powerful and creative i liked the speech as well the bars you spit from 1:07 is fckin pure fire bro i feel you on every point you raised in that verse and i do wish you carried that verse a little longer but the song its self is pure fire either way the speech you ended with again fire the vocal effects you put are quality and give your voice this sense of authority and vibrancy its some martin luther king shit you projecting on this! haha

      i dig the speeches and the spoken word poems as well you have included in this project i love touches like that it gives the music a sense of vibrancy and authenticity i do wish you included some lyrics with the link just so its easier for me to follow cause i feel im sleeping on some bars and concepts

      also your song lengths are perfect for an upcoming rapper 1-2 minutes is perfect for solo songs i find because you express ur ideas and can get more people listening to them the project its self is very vibrant, authentic and powerful in the subject matter and places you explored thru out i can tell u put ur all into ur music also are you at all influenced by KRIT i do see and hear a lot of similarities in ur music with his
      Man i really appreciate you taking the time out to listen to this so much bro, and I'm influenced slightly by KRIT our ideas are similar i believe and we're both from the south and such but I know consciously my biggest influences are Lil Wayne, Kanye, Ludacris, T.I. and so on.

      I recorded this whole thing in my car with the microphone on my camera. So I'm happy for anything that happens with it to be honest.

      When I get on my feet financially I'm probably gonna re record this and then work on the things in my head, I'll add the lyrics now though give me a bit

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      • #4
        This is good work, and I record all my music from my phone as well, great job on Inner Morale Gain I like it. Lol don’t make me start doing poetry raps
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        • #5
          Originally posted by Mobbin Moe View Post
          This is good work, and I record all my music from my phone as well, great job on Inner Morale Gain I like it. Lol don’t make me start doing poetry raps
          I appreciate it, and lol do the raps you wanna hear bro lol when I'm rappin I don't even consider it poetry rap lol is that how it sounds?

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          • #6
            Inner Morale Gain is my favorite. I get a starlito mixed with K.R.I.T vibe but that doesnt really matter its dope regardless
            https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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            • #7
              THIS.IS.REALLY.GOOD "been a long time since i met some genuine people, with open mouths and closed minds, ignorance is lethal" so good plus your style is unique which i really appreciate, you should add a download link, i want to listen to this more...10/10 keep rapping buh try to make the songss longer-that is my only issue 10/10

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              • #8
                Originally posted by StephenKING View Post
                Man i really appreciate you taking the time out to listen to this so much bro, and I'm influenced slightly by KRIT our ideas are similar i believe and we're both from the south and such but I know consciously my biggest influences are Lil Wayne, Kanye, Ludacris, T.I. and so on.

                I recorded this whole thing in my car with the microphone on my camera. So I'm happy for anything that happens with it to be honest.

                When I get on my feet financially I'm probably gonna re record this and then work on the things in my head, I'll add the lyrics now though give me a bit

                woah im even more impressed you managed to pull something like this off with a phone camera dude! thats amazing i cant even imagine what youd pull off with a proper set-up man!




                #FREEVELVET

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                • #9
                  I really felt reborn at the end

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