First song!

[Brandon51]

Been working on some music lately and put out my first track! Lemme know what y'all think
https://youtu.be/91E3847MdTc

[Zimmie]

not to bad bro its alright for a first song i like the vocal effects and the beat is great but delivery is very flat i feel what your aiming for in a sense but your flow is a bit weak

you got a good voice though i can sense that it could hit some unique dynamics if you know how to use it right

[Brandon51]

not to bad bro its alright for a first song i like the vocal effects and the beat is great but delivery is very flat i feel what your aiming for in a sense but your flow is a bit weak

you got a good voice though i can sense that it could hit some unique dynamics if you know how to use it right

Thanks a lot for the feedback bro. Much appreciated!

[WaywardSon]

not bad for your first..your flow could be better buh i like the line "just a lost soul tryna fill the hole"...

[Laudacity93]

Way better than my first song foreal. Keep it up the quality was okay I could understand what youre saying just the flow needs sculpting. Also you gotta give feedback twice before posting

[Brandon51]

not bad for your first..your flow could be better buh i like the line "just a lost soul tryna fill the hole"...

Thanks man!

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Way better than my first song foreal. Keep it up the quality was okay I could understand what youre saying just the flow needs sculpting. Also you gotta give feedback twice before posting

Haha thanks bro definitely a work in progress. Gotta keep working at it and get it down right