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    SPOILERthrow ur ashes in the air
    now you gone with the wind
    to a poker face u stare
    try to balance sins
    with forgiveness
    you here to witness
    close your eyes and listen
    i can see the future see my eyes are telescopic
    you microscopic in the scheme of the universe
    aint that hurt?
    everyday is just clockwork till it hit noon now you floatin in a hearse
    they say zimmie absurd when he spits a verse
    immersed in the words
    i just sit on your mind
    like piss on the curb
    clear all my nerves
    twist your reality
    break your matrix
    causing fatalities
    then shape-shift
    cause havoc where you sit
    i spit in the sea
    and light it on fire
    i do whats required
    not desired




    yeah i never wanted that 9-5
    but i work that 9-9
    and put my 99.9 percent
    used to lay up dead in the bed
    i emerged from the grave
    now you see i fire shots point blank
    you just graze
    i amaze trapped in a maze therefore i am amazing
    gone away from home for days and days
    Zimmie wally finally here with no delays


    you don’t relate to kings and
    i froze all your limbs and
    drop you in the water with shark fins and its
    all bout balance you know ying and yang
    i spit venom like I’m rocking vangs
    whilst i juggle the world in the palm of my hands
    i kick the moon into ur plans
    going head to head like a rams


    running from the darhaka
    spin round like Dastan using my liquid swords
    to fight the demons of the night
    I’m boxed in by shadows
    it feel like I’m shadow boxing
    i kick down the door whilst ur politely knocking
    you love that hoe behind ur back she trotting
    plotting ready to scheme
    and deceive you stay you don’t leave
    damn you boxed in
    back to the topic at hand
    i switch mic hands like the time ticker on a watch man
    sit back and watch man
    i spit bars man
    you obsessed like stan man
    i disappear like sand man
    these thots fckin round got ghosts in they pussies man
    i get into every nook and cranny
    these rappers serve bullshit i spit it out like gordon ramsay
    spitting bar after bar doing even more damage
    ride away laughing zig zagging thru traffic
    tragic
    abracadabra i disappear like magic







    SPOILERgot the gloves on like I’m shocker
    give your door a knock ah
    I’m stunting I’m running the game
    my bitch be wild ur bitches is tame
    i am freakin insane nothing in my brain
    i go off the chain
    you locked thats a shame
    no one to blame
    my thang go bang bang
    i spit flames flame gang
    moolah szn
    i season you rappers I’m eating u rappers
    then I’m taking a big crap ah moolah


    she give me ball head make a wish
    she serve the ass like a dish
    i put it in her hole like swish
    you can call me young steven curry




    she looking round for diamond rings’
    I’m moving on to finer things
    she addicted to dick she wanna bing
    hit it from the back i make her sing



    Last edited by Zimmie; 11-22-2018, 10:32 AM.




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    • #3
      The words arent bad, the flow not bad but the confidence bro, like maybe try memorizing it more Idk if you do that already before recording but i feel like thatd help you out alot

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      • #4
        Not gonna lie the Gza beat was a change in a good direction. Would love to hear you over more wu style beats.
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        • #5
          Originally posted by StephenKING View Post
          The words arent bad, the flow not bad but the confidence bro, like maybe try memorizing it more Idk if you do that already before recording but i feel like thatd help you out alot
          Originally posted by Laudacity93 View Post
          Not gonna lie the Gza beat was a change in a good direction. Would love to hear you over more wu style beats.
          thank you both for the feedback and for taking the time to listen

          [MENTION=76046]StephenKING[/MENTION] and i agree something bout my voice i cant quite grasp or it might be my mic but im not sure what it is but sometimes my voice doesnt project as much as id like
          [MENTION=46219]Laudacity93[/MENTION] thank you fam i really dug the beat definitely felt the need to spit on it! old school beats do have this unique flavour to em easier to reflect and project ideas on with modern beats always fill i have to present a different energy




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          • #6
            Can’t be serious lol but aye I know u playing
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            • #7
              Originally posted by Mobbin Moe View Post
              Can’t be serious lol but aye I know u playing
              thats all i get fam give me some adequate criticism blood




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              • #8
                Double time flow is nice, the slow flow my fit even better tho but u did both so it work and the change prob make the flow sound better, lyrics are dope, only thing really keeping it from being like legit mainstream artist dope is like someone sed the projection of voice it even then it works

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                • #9
                  i like them both lol it's obvious you were freestyling. you just need better beats. and a 1.5x time flow. oh and yung lucky was hot

                  SPOILERhot garbage

                  lol. nah I'm just playing, I liked it but i definitely liked shadowboxin more

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