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    I`ll take you to my clan,and make you remember some members
    Cause we`re about to dismember some dissemblers in December
    Searchin for kids in fun-fair,hopin they`re alone,oh there`s one there
    Now I`m gonna go wit my gun there,and silently kidnap him unprepared
    I`m just a lunatic that aint lavish when it comes to giving stabs
    I`m that guy in your street thats living bad,makin experiments in his lab
    Man I think its normal to run through the crowded mall,wit my 45 colt
    Police cant catch me cause I`m faster then Bolt,thunder struck me wit 5045 volts
    Bitch fallow me if you wanna war,come to my basement I wanna show you my sword
    Ima crazy Cro in a ward,and I`ll blow you wit my C4,that`ll place you below your floor
    Where do you people live?You think you saw all when you meat crazy suicidal terrorist
    Well NOO,I`m worst,If you dont believe me,ask my crazy idle psychotherapist
    First time I tasted blood I was like"Bitch I Like It",It was just like I`m BILI
    You`re afraid,"Because I`m Lyrically,Ideal" so you cant kill me,I`m BILI?
    And bitches you aint ready for my brutality.Raps?Who wanna challenge me
    Battlin me is danger see,my raps do kill,they stop your heart,my mentality??
    Do I have brain??Am I smart??Sure,how else would I top these fuckin charts
    Not music charts,but charts in extracting hearts,and pulling human parts
    Ima at the party,girl come sit next to me,dont worry,I just wanna slip you this ecstesy
    And then when it starts to effect,I`ll take you to my room and make you have sex wit me
    I only know one reason why we need women,and its to put our dicks in`em
    You think we cant do it that way but we can,you know why?cause we`re man

  • #2
    Re: New shit

    bumpin this

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    • #3
      Re: New shit

      Its not bad bruh. Keep doin' ya thing.

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      • #4
        Re: New shit

        thx man

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        • #5
          Re: New shit

          Originally posted by BILI
          I`ll take you to my clan,and make you remember some members
          Cause we`re about to dismember some dissemblers in December
          Searchin for kids in fun-fair,hopin they`re alone,oh there`s one there
          Now I`m gonna go wit my gun there,and silently kidnap him unprepared
          this part honestly sounds like a petophile
          I`m just a lunatic that aint lavish when it comes to giving stabs
          I`m that guy in your street thats living bad,makin experiments in his lab
          Man I think its normal to run through the crowded mall,wit my 45 colt
          Police cant catch me cause I`m faster then Bolt,thunder struck me wit 5045 volts
          Bitch fallow me if you wanna war,come to my basement I wanna show you my sword
          Ima crazy Cro in a ward,and I`ll blow you wit my C4,that`ll place you below your floor
          Where do you people live?You think you saw all when you meat crazy suicidal terrorist
          Well NOO,I`m worst,If you dont believe me,ask my crazy idle psychotherapist
          First time I tasted blood I was like"Bitch I Like It",It was just like I`m BILI
          You`re afraid,"Because I`m Lyrically,Ideal" so you cant kill me,I`m BILI?
          And bitches you aint ready for my brutality.Raps?Who wanna challenge me
          Battlin me is danger see,my raps do kill,they stop your heart,my mentality??
          Do I have brain??Am I smart??Sure,how else would I top these fuckin charts
          Not music charts,but charts in extracting hearts,and pulling human parts
          Ima at the party,girl come sit next to me,dont worry,I just wanna slip you this ecstesy
          And then when it starts to effect,I`ll take you to my room and make you have sex wit me
          I only know one reason why we need women,and its to put our dicks in`em
          You think we cant do it that way but we can,you know why?cause we`re man

          Except for the lil issue i pointed out above i thought this was overall a good verse... its longer than average but still a good verse jus could use some tweaks before it is recorded if ever is. the rhymes were all good as well except there were a cpl a that kinda fell off the balance but you picked it up and got it back on course everytime.

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          • #6
            Re: New shit

            ^^thx homie
            oh and lol to that line,I never thought about it and it kinda does look like pedophile,but well fuck it,I guess I can change it

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